i listened to this, i dont necessarily agree with the above comments, i think you did what you wanted, and thats most important imo.

a suggestion for the mixing though, i think you should EQ dip some harsher sounds out to help them gel more, experiment with different q and db settings, first lift them a bit to find the most agitated/harsher parts then lower them.

cool float pad.

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Originally posted by MSZ i listened to this, i dont necessarily agree with the above comments, i think you did what you wanted, and thats most important imo. a suggestion for the mixing though, i think you should EQ dip some harsher sounds out to help them gel more, experiment with different q and db settings, first lift them a bit to find the most agitated/harsher parts then lower them. cool float pad.

Sweet dude thank you for your input. I must agree with your first statement. good idea with the EQ'ing, glad you brought it to my attention.

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Originally posted by sicc Contiguous(Updated!) by sicc Took your guys advice, tried to make the progression a bit more subtle, added a few things, played with some filters on 3 different elements, and simplified the cymbals. What do you guys think? Does that lil break beat section flow with the track towards the end or does it feel a bit to abrasive?

Kinda reminds me of the old '94 tune Havana - Blanc
Got a similar vibe and i know thats one of me favourite tunes
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=92-zPvbRPjw

you have some nice elements there, alittle bit of a melody would top it off for me. not a fan of the breakbeat, mybe keep the bassline in there??? I see visions of bright lights with this one, cool work

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Originally posted by Peter Campbell you have some nice elements there, alittle bit of a melody would top it off for me. not a fan of the breakbeat, mybe keep the bassline in there??? I see visions of bright lights with this one, cool work

Thanks dude, I appreciate it.

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