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cool track indeed.

Thanks again for all the listens and feedback, I'm happy that you guys seem to like it. I don't quite feel my own stuff is of a standard that I'd be happy to try and sell properly just yet, although I do feel I'm getting closer. So I'm not planning on sending this to any labels for a release, just gonna leave it up on soundcloud as a freebie (along with my other tracks). I've already sent it to a few dj friends in Melbourne and am gonna play it out myself next time I get the chance to really test it out a bit and see peoples reactions, I'd like to hear it on a decent system, just hope not to clear the floor lol.

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I think it's pretty good tbh. There are some obvious issues with the mix, which are mainly the lack of bottom end but that's due to the monitoring issue as you say.

I can't really fault the rest of the track at all and i'm particularly impressed by some of the fx and ideas you've got in there. It sounds like a track made by somebody that knows what they're doing to a large degree.

Get yourself some monitors and I don't reckon it'll be long before you get signed. It's much better (mix aside) than most of the shite that goes out on the smaller labels as it is already.

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Originally posted by tehlord I think it's pretty good tbh. There are some obvious issues with the mix, which are mainly the lack of bottom end but that's due to the monitoring issue as you say. I can't really fault the rest of the track at all and i'm particularly impressed by some of the fx and ideas you've got in there. It sounds like a track made by somebody that knows what they're doing to a large degree. Get yourself some monitors and I don't reckon it'll be long before you get signed. It's much better (mix aside) than most of the shite that goes out on the smaller labels as it is already.

Hey thanks for the constructive and positive feedback G. I've been trying to produce for a couple of years although I've been a DJ working on and off for a long time now and have done a little bit of work helping out in a few recording studios in the past, it's nice to read comments like that.
A good pair of monitors and finding a nice space to be able to set-up a studio/workspace are a pretty high priority for me, once I can sort out a few other personal issues I'm dealing with atm. I'm glad you've pointed out the issues with the mix, like I said I'm not too surprised but it's good to know.

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Originally posted by tehlord ........ and i'm particularly impressed by some of the fx and ideas you've got in there. It sounds like a track made by somebody that knows what they're doing to a large degree.

And guess from who did he learn that from

Lol, just sweet work man!!!

Cheers,

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Originally posted by pozz i'm really impressed by this piece man. there's a slight busyness (alot going on at once, alot of elements) when the main bit of the mix kicks in after the breakdown. that main section is not drawn out enough -- you got nice melody and all that but it disappears so fast. only part i didn't like was the breakdown itself, although i see what you tried to do: multiple little tricks to make us expect a drop that doesn't come, pulling back a few times until it DROPS. it's too much man, feels kinda convoluted. i also listened to "Retrieval 1", "One More Twip", and "Chrome Shift" -- holy shit man, you got some heavy compositional skill, especially in polyphony and rhythm. very wide variety of sound. the latter especially sounds like a vibe Russians have been very into for the last 10 years or so. (mixing has to improve, but i'm the wrong person to offer concrete advice about that.)

This kind of thorough, balanced feedback makes it feel worthwhile posting music in this place, I'm a lot happier with the response and comments I'm getting from you guys here than what little I've had on soundcloud, so thanks again to you all.
You've given me some good thoughts here I can work with poz, so I'll certainly be looking at improving the structure of my breakdowns with future works. I guess I can also say that the thing I find hardest dealing with or working towards is drawing out the arrangement melodically, I'm currently working on another house tune, playing with some drawn out arrangement ideas as I can certainly see where you're coming from with these comments.
Thanks for checking out my other works, yea I try to keep a few projects on the go at the same time time and try to be somewhat diverse as it keeps things interesting, keeps me motivated and the ideas flowing. I don't take everything I do with music too seriously but I have some projects where I do. I just think I'll be happy if I can keep improving as consistently as I have say over the last 12 months.

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This is a great little song.
Love your rhythms in this.
Will check your other work now mate.

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Originally posted by Camwin This is a great little song. Love your rhythms in this. Will check your other work now mate.

Thanks for your feedback and for checking out my music Cam, the stuff on soundcloud is quite varied, also currently working on a drum n bass track that I might post here when I get it all together.

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