it doesnt sound terrible, just very...pointless

it doesnt go anywhere, the melody is non-existant and the chord progression is kinda typical.

its very...'downloaded fruityloops and made this'

lol

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Originally posted by KilldaDJ it doesnt sound terrible, just very...pointless it doesnt go anywhere, the melody is non-existant and the chord progression is kinda typical. its very...'downloaded fruityloops and made this' lol

Actually I thought to use that as a verse, not as main melody.

But yeah, it is basic. I'm still having hard time to put the various pieces of a track (arrangement), to obtain something fluent and logical.

I've started producing around 1 year ago...but didn't have a lot of time to improve my skill cause work takes big part of the day.

Thanks for the opinion.

its not bad at all

you've got basic elements in there and with a bit more work this can sound pretty decent

however the melody itself doesn't go anywhere.

word of advice, just throw in as many melodies as you can and start arranging your track from there, you have a lot more musical elements to work with so it doesn't sound too repetitive

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