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aside from my comments in the other thread, the mix is just too bright. And since you are using a hybrid of real and synthetic, i would place the pads to cover more of the low end and leave the room for the one instrument you have.
and those trance swishes, don't do that. don't put birds, or other sounds like that guy at the end.
that middle part with the chord changes is weird. not the chords ,just the way the chords change. And if you are going to make it way too reverby like you do, allow more space between the notes so that there is a point to that. i found this one just a little too cliche to the point of culturally insensitive.
but ya, for the mix. get rid of those lame swooshes. don't use backwards noise. its just too scarce a mix to do it and not be in your face and annoying.
and if you plan to get into film, well you are accentuating the frequency band you really aren't supposed to be in.
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