liking the idea of this tune but things are to drawn out and for the listener it gets boring try working on the arrangement a Little bit more

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Originally posted by stewart.m liking the idea of this tune but things are to drawn out and for the listener it gets boring try working on the arrangement a Little bit more

Cheers, that's one of the things that I'm working on with my current tracks.

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Originally posted by Julz i listen through it and 1 major thing u need to do is cut the lows of so many sounds, and PAN!!! The pluck midi you have near the start of the track could make a great lead with some variation, much better than the massive saw pad your using. I'd make some kind of Jochen Miller style lead, like what he used in Red Out. Work on your arrangement, its too long. Or bring something totally new in after 48 bars of the lead playing

I did as much panning as I could, its just that I had too many elemnts and by the time I realised that these things were wrong with the track, It was too late to fix it.

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Originally posted by MIKE333ACE Thanks for this. and i already have a back-up label called Daytona-Records, (if i cant get this song on any other label). however they are just a small label, so the music I publish on there barely gets any notice. And thanks for the YouTube vid. I'm always gonna be a classic Trance fan, but I can definitely take some ideas from this track. Cheers

Don't worry about releases man, just worry about improving your monitoring situation and staying persistent about learning new things and practicing ideas. Getting on a label isn't important, improving the quality of your productions is. Don't fret though, things can only get better since you're a young lad starting out. Pace yourself.

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Originally posted by Evolve140 Don't worry about releases man, just worry about improving your monitoring situation and staying persistent about learning new things and practicing ideas. Getting on a label isn't important, improving the quality of your productions is. Don't fret though, things can only get better since you're a young lad starting out. Pace yourself.

Well good news is that I have been offered a non-exclusive deal to release this song on a new label that has a fb page with over 156 000 fans, and also, I can assure u that my current track that I'm working on is 100x better than this. I've sent it to a few of my producer friends over skype and they've said that the EQ'ing is basically perfect. I'll upload a demo to soundcloud soon.

So even though i was pretty happy with this track, things are still on the up for me, which keeps me motivated

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Originally posted by MIKE333ACE Well good news is that I have been offered a non-exclusive deal to release this song on a new label that has a fb page with over 156 000 fans

No offense but that speaks volumes about that label

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Originally posted by Julz No offense but that speaks volumes about that label

Meh, i've had good feedback from Trance fans that dont produce, so I'm happy with it all, even tho there are some errors in the track.

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Originally posted by Looney4Clooney don't expect critical feedback from friends.

True, but I only have a couple of friends that are producers and give me any feedback, so most of it just comes from random ppl around the world.

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