You are netgarbage, and out in the real world, everybody knows. Nobody likes you, even if you pretend to be relevant here. Your posts are senseless garbage, and in real life, you probably are real assholes.

Yes, I am not going to stick around. You are going to have the forum for yourself, and your lame friends, and probably suck eachothers dicks in rebellion aganist your own sense.

Now everybody knows where all the feggets online came from.

Peace

I love the cognitive dissonance of delivering a hate and bigotry filled rant, with the sign-off of "Peace".


Anyways, he's gone now. Let the dick sucking commence!

Well, since I started this shit... ME FIRST!!

here's my contructive review of your track :

- the track needs more layering, it feels empty at some point and lacking "life"

- the kick needs some low ends, actually it sound way too high and volume needs to be reduced, it's too present in the track

- i feel like the bassline/sub isn't present that much, maybe this is due to your mixdown or the mastering ?

- 5 minute is a bit short for a trance track, to be dj friendly, you should add at least 16 bars to the end and building the track differently, otherwise people won't be able to mix it

- maybe there's too much filter cut off on the lead

- piano going on @ 1:57 is way too loud and a bit distorting, you should also consider droping the kick and bring more pads presence, would give way lot more trance feel to the track (this is why every track has a breakdown)

overall : i think track has a potential, acids are great, the pattern and "musical aspect" of it is great, you should work a bit on the imaging and life of the track and adding sounds/fx/eqing/variations to it