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Originally posted by DaveC *BUMP* Full Version Now available, some changes have been made to the melody

oi, no bumping

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rar dave, my comments, and i like the tune but i think i should point out what needs to be done

stop robbing my clap, percussion needs a bit more EQing as i still reakon it sounds reasony, strings are nice but a bit sharp coming in and quite loud. nice bass btw the synth is well excellent, its about time you got a guddun the synth that does the 2 bow noises every 4 beats needs to be quieter/lower or summat. i like the nunrg boom noise i think the melody comes out of nowhere a lil bit and sounds too depressed u f00 make happy spooner break is maybe a tad long, and i think the bass fits with the tune but is in minor some of the time so it sounds a bit dodgy i think, im not an expert tho i think it just needs more work and refining.

overall, your startin 2 get it 2gether with reason which is well cool, the tune sounds more older style nunrg than push 2 me, just some stuff needs refining and u will hav summat 2 be proud of

luke

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i sed it before and ill say it again, this track fucking rools, awesome riff all very well put together.... but dave... as i sed in mIRC.....

<[N]uk|eu[Z]> erm, dave.. i think you need 2 breaks
<[N]uk|eu[Z]> make the track a couple mins longer
<[N]uk|eu[Z]> let it die down after the first
<[N]uk|eu[Z]> ... then woooopah bring in the second
<[N]uk|eu[Z]> the outtro lasts too long



<[N]uk|eu[Z]> well, dont drag the firstone out too much.. let it die down and get back into normalness for a bit.... then do a great build up... so you can hear build up of energy too this time...... then wack the riff back in.. with more energy, so its in yer face more

<[N]uk|eu[Z]> keep this version...... and do what i sed. for an extended version
<[N]uk|eu[Z]> then it will appeal to 2 slightly diff tastes


<[N]uk|eu[Z]> got it// just showing my dad your tune
<[N]uk|eu[Z]> nowt like a bit of plugging eh?
lol
showing your dad? wtf
<[N]uk|eu[Z]> hehe
he like trance?
<[N]uk|eu[Z]> oi, i tell ya, my dads a trance loving son of a mofo
<[N]uk|eu[Z]> hard trance
<[N]uk|eu[Z]> naturally
<[N]uk|eu[Z]> he like trance generators
<[N]uk|eu[Z]> lol
lol


hehehe .... these are the only things i can complain about in your tune, apart from that..... fucking minted.. get it p-r-e-s-s-e-d, dumbass

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sounds very nice man!

some points tho:
i don`t like that snare 2 much..
it needs a bit more power..
percussion is a bit basic (thats just me)
the main synths envelope could be a bit longer..
its beginning 2 sound a bit boring 2 me afer a while

but the overall sound is pretty proffesional

greets,

dj mantis

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Originally posted by mantisnl percussion is a bit basic (thats just me)

project t reccomends a good listening to gouryella - tenshi for djmantis

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gr8 track!
cant fund something to make better, maybe cahnge the drums coming in 0:16... they have this basic non proffesional sound, except that, gr8 track

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