Very Good! i liked it.

I couldn't find any mistakes or anything wrong with the tune, it's 100% approved by my ears!

i like it altough i only have one ear working (crappy inet cafes )
if i was at home i would have listened closer and tried to give some better feedback....but youve got to do it with this now good work,
keep it up mate!

john

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Wow, thanks for replying you all

Just not many comments about what to change, only about adding some hihats. Thanks for replying and taking time to listen though
Hope I get some more usefull comments

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This is a good remix, but there are some things I would change. Like another said I think the track needs much more percussion. I also think the track needs more variation sound vise. The main synth is very good, but it's playing for almost the whole track and even several melodies at the same time. Maybe you should try some more variation in that area. The thing you did with the voice of the women was very cool btw

Peace

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Originally posted by Fatboy This is a good remix, but there are some things I would change. Like another said I think the track needs much more percussion. I also think the track needs more variation sound vise. The main synth is very good, but it's playing for almost the whole track and even several melodies at the same time. Maybe you should try some more variation in that area. The thing you did with the voice of the women was very cool btw Peace

Great, thanks for this comment
I'll try to something about those things, at least i'll write some notes for tracks I'm gonna make in the future
cheers mate

synth is too grainy, need to be richer then it would be fat...

The structure could also be a little more normal when you keep

basically it just sounds too amateur for my tastes, except for 4:28 - 5:49, which is nice and not grainy, and nothing too weird.

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I find this track to sound too empty at times. There are parts where it is totally silent and it throws the flow of the track off IMO. I suggest maybe adding some underlying strings, even if they are real faint. Just something to help with those awkward moments of silience and some of the emptiness.

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Sorry, forgot to add the good stuff... I really liked that structure of the track. That voice part was very unexpected. I loved it. I think if you work on making it sound fuller you will have a great remix.

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Originally posted by davinox synth is too grainy, need to be richer then it would be fat... The structure could also be a little more normal when you keep basically it just sounds too amateur for my tastes, except for 4:28 - 5:49, which is nice and not grainy, and nothing too weird.

Thanks for the commecnt mate
Since I am an amateur, I think my remix is alowed to sound amateur
Just kiddin' I'll try to work on it ofcourse thanks