well done, i like the breaks, but they do need more variation, and thanks for nicking my piano btw

nice chilled out melody n stuff, i really like it a lot, speak 2 u l8r on msn if it will fekkin work

good stuff

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I'm impressed... Quite a nice and chilled track, I tend to get lost with these tracks so I can't be of much help criticizing

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thanks for comments, and the tips I appreciate it alot
Luke, i just added reverb to 'grand piano', I guess it sounds quite like redawn piano

you know what i just found out?: THIS TRACK IS AWESOME! eLe_vatE, YOUR A FREAKKIN GENIUS! this track is soooo good! and i don't even listen to breaks useally. man, this track will LivE in my computer

hehe, thanks alot man

Really nice flowing track - the melodies work really well. I think more of a stonger melody (i.e. louder) is required somewhere in the track though.

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hey, great track! very sweet melodies and the beat is very good too although it drowns abit under all the synths I think and as others have said already, it needs more variety.

keep it up

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wow man great track.. same critique as most.. the beat needs more.. i am also not a very big perc-guy tho so i know what u mean about getting bored with it after a long time.. love the melodies man

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more comments thanks for taking the time to dl & listen guys, appreciated.