the beginning sounds good...but it feels like you might need a reverb on something or some pad in the background to make the "right feeling"....
the pre-middle is good, captures a lot of NRG which is always awesome when your on the dance floor!you might wanna play with volumes & EQ but nothing major...
The breakdown & after (3:32-) very interesting variation of hi hats, can't judge weather its good or bad, but deffinately new to my ears
the end is good, but ofcourse you can always add something

anyway, my comments are my oppinion which you might disagree with

If I would be the judge, I would deffinately put it on the Next Tunnel Trance Force sounds like their style (one of my fav's)

repsect,
maxik

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hmm......
it may kinda sound strange to you.... casue everybody who posted realy like the track...

I love many of your productions...
but i dont know about this one....
some stuff that bothered me: (i know you probably won't fix them, cause most of ppl love it that way, and you heard my own productions, and well......but anyway )

1:20.... i dont like the sound of that synth...again like those "metalic" sounds you tend to use - that i dont like that much
6:10 , the new snares or whatever that come here...are kinda of-beat and it desnt sound well to me

overall the production is great like always... but i guess its just not my style...

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Originally posted by Flotser 1:20.... i dont like the sound of that synth...again like those "metalic" sounds you tend to use - that i dont like that much

i agree, i really dislike those sharp metallic synths you tend to use in alot of your tunes.

overall, i'm not feeling this track, and i was disappointed since you said Mark Norman style heh, cause I love Mark Norman.

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I really don't like this track, but it might be because it's not my kind of trance. I think the sound image is really unpleasant to listen to and it sounds extremely boxy.

That's my honest 2p anyway

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It might not just be my style, but I didn't really like it... The metallic synth sounds don't really fit in I believe. Especially not as some sort of bassline you're tried to use them?

Not that good imho... But then again, I'm no fan at all from tunes such as Flight 643 either. Could be the problem

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the update is better, but i think u should have started the track in the same way as the original version

and the bassline still needs to be rounder in its sound, but its still good

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hmmm ill, need 2 downlaod the updated version be4 i comment

quote:

Originally posted by attacc I really don't like this track, but it might be because it's not my kind of trance. I think the sound image is really unpleasant to listen to and it sounds extremely boxy. That's my honest 2p anyway

i agree the tune sounds pretty sharp and mettalic. Not my kind of trance...

sorry

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no need to be sorry mate
that's why you're here for

each one and his own taste...

i've made this track as a request from the label i'm in contact with...
by the way, both of the versions here, are just 50% of the versions i have, the other 50% i've sent to the label...

i just placed a link here to get an idea of what you guys think.


thanks alot for all your comments guys!
its very appriciated and on the other versions, i've used some of the tips ppl gave me here!
so don't think u've done it all for nothing



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