hello! Trance God... um... was it me or did most of that not make any sense?... but i think i understand what ure sayin..lol!!! and no offense taken, im gonna do alot more on it.... im gonna try and put more pads in and change the melody and crap like that so blah...um... yeah dj pete...fire away!! hehehe

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Originally posted by Yevat hello! Trance God... um... was it me or did most of that not make any sense?... but i think i understand what ure sayin..lol!!! and no offense taken, im gonna do alot more on it.... im gonna try and put more pads in and change the melody and crap like that so blah...um... yeah dj pete...fire away!! hehehe

Ok I will tell you what I think in the morning I am off to bed now .

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Hey Yevat it's a nice catchy song. I am listening now and i must say I really like it.

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hello! thanx! um... dont get used to the melody... i changed it entirlety... much more catchier... and much more um... i dunno... there is a word for it i think...i dunno... i SHOULD be done with it either late tonight or early tomorrow morning... and ill replace it with the old file...

Ok Yevat I`ve had a good listen you getting some notes that clash at the 2 min mark when the 2 melodies come in , the one that has the 16 beat cord change then the 8 then 8 again is the ones out , go up a note higher after the 16 . I can`t read music I make all my music by ear , But its differently out . you have used the same notes later in the song to the buzzing sound I think . I don`t like that bassline , change the sound and make it louder and bring up the claps to ,

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ok... ive COMPLETELY finished now!! and the ong has been completely changed and i mean COMLETELY.... new bass, new melody, EVERYTHING..... i overwrote the old file cause i didnt have enough space to have 2 seperate files, so just use the same link again: http://homepage.ntlworld.com/tavey....0The%20Past.MP3

yevat im just about 2 min in, its catchy so far
but your synth or wahtever the fuck you call it, that comes in on the top line at about 1:30 or so, that three note line which repeats, moves up a minor third, and repeats

its in the wrong key.
move it DOWN one note (or half a step) (right now your base three notes for that synth line are B flat, A, D)
change that to A, A flat and D flat and you will find its in perfect harmony.

im sorry i forgot all the technical term bullshit, its really embarrassing after 12 yrs of intense classical music. half a note half a step/key whatever

i hope you understand what i mean. i'll give more criticism (constructive!) after listening to whole thing

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i love how you fade in that melody (2:33) and stuff (other instruments, hi hats), as it crescendoes (builds up, basically, increasing in volume)

that's the kind of stuff i have no idea how to do w/ software. even though IMHO (seriously) my melodic chords and progressions are well polished.

does anyone want to collaborate with me?

i have no idea how, but trust me... with the amount of time i spend just "remixing" songs in my head, i think my skills would be beneficial to anyone with a good grasp of the software (dj pete?)
heh

icq 36738410

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LMFAO! i dont actually understand ANY music terms at all... so when u talk about middle C, chords, and notes and crap...im totally lost....but! i think i know what u are talking about... ill try and fix it, and see if it is what u are talking about, im at school right now so i have no real way of doing that...lol! and ive only been makin music for almost a year now....so that explains why i dont know much about the terms and stuff...hehehe, anyhow, thanx! anyone have more abuse and critisizm?...LOL!

Yevat these notes clash more on the orinagle , the bassline cord progression with the melody is way off , but it doesn`t matter its all a learning process , Perhaps you should get on ICQ with Patticus because I cant tell you a C from a D , all my work is done by ear . I think Patticus will help you out , I hope anyway . I see that BPM was up on the last and the sound image was a little better , but I still like the first mix of this song . Keep on trying .

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Originally posted by patticus does anyone want to collaborate with me? (dj pete?) heh icq 36738410

A lot of people have asked me that already Patticus , but the thing is I just want to work with my self at the moment , If what I`am working at the moment takes off I want to produce some Vocal Trance or Eurodance so I will need a female vocal for this . But if there is any thing I can help you out on I will { software programs synths what ever } but I suppose we could do a project together if you want , you can do the notes cords and how you want the song to sound and I will produce it , then we will post it here on TA . My ICQ is 115192235

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Can u put the 1st mix of this song up??? I was downloading it b-4 at 1 time but it was way to slow, put it up on a fast connection I would love to hear it... Damn, pretty good song, I dont really like the begining to much.. It sounds too much like the trance that 1st started off being produced in 94-95, but when the XTC around the 2:00 mark starts off, it starts sounding really decent... Good work

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