sorry dude i took it down now cause i wanna start sending it off, ive gotten enough feedback. thanks tho

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i just saw some of you are playing a bitta house atm, so here's my new techy-house tune i just finished. Whie i usually produce trance i thought i'd give it a go.
any form of feedback would be toooo appreciated!

size approx 8mb.. 160kbit quality

http://www.users.bigpond.net.au/lew...und%20(160).zip

thanks heaps!

Hey,

Having a listen now. Thanx for posting the track.

Comments:-
Bass is WAY to over powering, EQ it down a bit. The bass kick also sounds like it's starting to distort on each kick. Whilst re-EQing the track bring the highs out further they sit way to low, and clean them up a bit.

The length of the track is pretty good for what it does, if anything perhaps the lead in is a bit long (perhaps 40-60 seconds), either that or more variety needs to be added at the start. After the break down, the way it all fits together is nice.

It's got a bit of an psy/acidy feel to it, not bad, it fits in very well with the vocoding.

Hope that's a start. It's a nice track, just needs a bit of polishing

--djway

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thanks for the tips mate. not the best at mastering so i will definitely have a look at changing it up based on your recommendations

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Originally posted by Lew.D i just saw some of you are playing a bitta house atm, so here's my new techy-house tune i just finished. Whie i usually produce trance i thought i'd give it a go. any form of feedback would be toooo appreciated! size approx 8mb.. 160kbit quality http://www.users.bigpond.net.au/lew...und%20(160).zip thanks heaps!

Bass: Drowns the entire track... and it sounds quite muddy... roll off at 300 Hz....


Vocal: pan it... and apply a DeEsser on it... its hissing a bit

Heres an awesome article on EQing:

http://www.dnbscene.com/articles.php?mode=display&id=79

Ok Gang,

After much deliberation:

Access - Begin (beta v1.0.2.4.1.1.7 )


To stream the mp3:
http://www.musicv2.com/mp3_request....2_4_1_1_7__.mp3

To download the mp3:
http://www.musicv2.com/mp3_request....2_4_1_1_7__.mp3

[collab of marsh & Reuben Owen]

- marsh.

(cheers to Pete F for the creative & Scott B for the hosting)

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Marsh - Distance (405 Recordings)

Hear the track on my Myspace https://www.beatport.com/en-US/html...133676/distance
http://www.discogs.com/release/1476900

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Originally posted by marsh Ok Gang, After much deliberation: Access - Begin (beta v1.0.2.4.1.1.7 ) To stream the mp3: http://www.musicv2.com/mp3_request....2_4_1_1_7__.mp3 To download the mp3: http://www.musicv2.com/mp3_request....2_4_1_1_7__.mp3 [collab of marsh & Reuben Owen] - marsh. (cheers to Pete F for the creative & Scott B for the hosting)

* Ok starts off well.... wouldnt have used that sound for the pad... however its spacey which is what you want in Trance... good stuff

* That lead however musically / sound is gay....

* bassline is alright

* break is crap ( overdone )

* chorus is crap ( overdone )

* u have some cool sounds... most of them i wouldnt use... dont know what VSTis or synths you are using


The overall mix sounds ok... keep working on your tune

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Originally posted by ONION * Wouldnt have used that sound for the pad... * That lead however musically / sound is gay.... * break is crap ( overdone ) * chorus is crap ( overdone ) * u have some cool sounds... most of them i wouldnt use...

hey man - appreciate your honesty =]

I guess the comments i have quoted pertain to that beautiful thing about human nature - we all like different stuff. He he...

You seem fairly knowledgable, but perhaps your preference lies in an entirely different style. I've heard a snippet of yours which sounded cool - we gonna get an end result anytime soon? look forward if so!

cheers.

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The one serious conviction that a man should have is that nothing is to be taken too seriously. -Nicholas Butler (1862 - 1947)

Marsh - Distance (405 Recordings)

Hear the track on my Myspace https://www.beatport.com/en-US/html...133676/distance
http://www.discogs.com/release/1476900

Last edited by marsh on Aug-14-2004 at 13:33

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Originally posted by marsh hey man - appreciate you honesty =] I guess the comments i have quoted pertain to that beautiful thing about human nature - we all like different stuff. He he... You seem fairly knowledgable, but perhaps your preference lies in an entirely different style. I've heard a snippet of yours which sounded cool - we gonna get an end result anytime soon? look forward if so! cheers.

Good to know that you took my critism constructively : ) There is no mallice in what I say if I dont like something...

Keep producing, you will only get better... Ive seen huge improvements from guys on this board with the music they produce... : )

Sasha - Motorola (Adam Jace Remix)

something ive been working on the last couple days..

enjoy

oh, and feedback of course!

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Last edited by jåcë on Aug-13-2004 at 10:16

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Originally posted by jåcë Sasha - Motorola (Adam Jace Remix) something ive been working on the last couple days.. enjoy oh, and feedback of course!

Dude...that fkn ownz...no shit!!! Fkn quality.

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