hmm you think a border on a cover? interesting... its hard to see it on here, but i'll give it a go in PS and see how it looks.
all the pages after this one, have a white border (transparent).
Originally posted by bas
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Dec-18-2007 01:56
mezzir
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quote:
Originally posted by goodgreef
hmm you think a border on a cover? interesting... its hard to see it on here, but i'll give it a go in PS and see how it looks.
all the pages after this one, have a white border (transparent).
yeah i just did a quick mockup, idk if the placement and size of the title is set in stone, cause that could be a problem. the lack of a clear edge with such a busy background just seems distracting (formerly an aspiring graphic designer )
Originally posted by mezzir
yeah i just did a quick mockup, idk if the placement and size of the title is set in stone, cause that could be a problem. the lack of a clear edge with such a busy background just seems distracting (formerly an aspiring graphic designer )
nothing is set in stone until i deliver the printed copy
i was mocking vogue and bazaar magazines that i own at home - most of which seem to break every law when it comes to graphic design (clutter, collage, different fonts, etc).
(interestingly enough, the same goes for fashion photography - the weirder it is the better).
But maybe making the font more bold will make the title stand out better against the busy background?
ps. the choice of the background is that the pattern is becoming a trend in fashion right now, and in the spring.
Originally posted by bas
That border would look silly on a magazine
you ever look at graphic design magazines?
as for other minor stuff if you're looking for critique etc:
definitely put some text just above the girls hands (if you're gonna add more)
i'd make the t in insight a bit wider. looks like a cross right now, and the rest of the font is very wide, it doesn't fit for me
from there on out its just depending on how much you wanna airbrush/fix things that you don't reeeeally need to (tiny touchups on eyebrows, adding highlights etc)
yeah, well i want to make this as perfect as i can, and i have 1 more week to continue on doing it. Every time i open up this file, i find some minor thing to change, or airbrush, so what's a few more.
lol @ the "t" cross reference. I don't want this to be a religious magazine!!! haha
I'll play around with it some more and post up the finished product within the next few days. thanks for all your awesome input
Originally posted by goodgreef
yeah, well i want to make this as perfect as i can, and i have 1 more week to continue on doing it. Every time i open up this file, i find some minor thing to change, or airbrush, so what's a few more.
lol @ the "t" cross reference. I don't want this to be a religious magazine!!! haha
I'll play around with it some more and post up the finished product within the next few days. thanks for all your awesome input
no problem
graphic design is something that i've always loved but i never get a chance to do much of anything regarding it so i'm more than happy to help, feel free to pm if you need opinions