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Orbax
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Registered: Apr 2002
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Silent broken church
Cliffside, ocean waves breaking
Sun spins into space

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Trazedict
[feed me prog]



Registered: Feb 2003
Location: chicago

3 plus 2 is 8
according to the penguin
that loves to wobble


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DJDigDug
Trolling when not Rolling



Registered: Oct 2002
Location: Indio, Calif. US

Windows crash ah fuck,
Mp3 downloads gone, sux
Bill Gates he must die!

Pill Consumption joy!
I can hardly walk Oh boy!
Burnt brain, my fav game.


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Paula
quietly



Registered: Jan 2003
Location: Washington, D.C.

eh... i'll try...

too many to count
the times you betrayed my trust
you exist no more


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the-un-named
tranceaddict in training



Registered: Jun 2003
Location: Michigan


Big nasty bugs crawl fast
Orkin man then sends a blast
now no bugs crawl fast


LOL


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somnium
Junior tranceaddict



Registered: Jun 2003
Location: IN, US

learn your penguins, mate!
3 plus 2 can not be 8!
like a sex machine.


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Orbax
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A fallen beer can
the sleeping pills are scattered
hand brushes carpet

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astroboy
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Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Melbourne

quote:
Originally posted by Orbax
A fallen beer can
the sleeping pills are scattered
hand brushes carpet


NICE!!
This is the way good haiku are supposed to be, the three lines are three seperate (non?)sentences with different subjects and objects, the link between them is indirect and thematic, or even vague and may not be immediately apparent, requiring a little thought to uncover. Thus you can achieve maximal expression in a minimum amount of words... this formal minimalism is, IMHO the essence of haiku


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[ groovypants ]
force of groovity



Registered: Sep 2002
Location: house of flying vinyls

I've always wondered about this Haiku stuff.
Hmmmm...

The darkness of white
Winter's snow covers the flow
Warmth is truely missed


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American composer John Cage on his aesthetic of silence

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EJECT EJECT EJECT !!!



Registered: Jun 2002
Location: Isle of Spam

The glass eye stares blank
Your socks are pink with blue dots
Tuna fish is swell


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bloated_cow
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Registered: Jul 2003
Location: Misery, MI

Do you have coffee?
I have eaten your mother!
You really do fear me.


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mos man
Ungrateful Jointpuffer



Registered: Jan 2002
Location: Kinkylab.com ®

the haiku is rolling
more than a year to this day
when will it ever end




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