i got pretty upset by the silly feedback you got first on the trance.nu forum. mostly because of the way they said it was just too long and there were some 'errors' in it (according to them, so if it's really errors depends on their view).
don't worry about the length, the track sounds good with it a it is. if they do find it too long, but like it, just go for the regular 'club mix' or so airbase has got tunes that are like 11 mins as well, so don't bother, nobody said anything about those.
keep it up mate! i do like this one, so i hope you get it released someday
LW
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Well ok, this thread didn't show up in my search; so sorry for the double post.
This track is excellent; the longer the better, that's my motto, so don't sweat the 14 minutes!
Intelligent trance; no question. Beautiful multilayered melody. Top quality!
Seriously.
Jun-15-2003 08:44
Endre
lol space music
Registered: Apr 2002
Location: Space
yeah wim, t.nu's promotion forum ppl are really assholes, i heard a remix of Energy 52 in there, now THAT is ERROR. heh.
released ey, iäve given up that for a long time ago if nothing happens in a year im gonna quit and think of doing something else..
intelligent trance ey...i like that
Jun-15-2003 09:45
-blake-
tranceaddict
Registered: Feb 2003
Location: Ottawa
Excellent track!
Your production skills are great. To myself and most people the hardest part of a track is getting the right 'sound', but you don't seem to have a problem with that. You have definitely mastered a lot of technical things to get that sound.
The only thing I noticed was the same thing that Shep did about at some parts the layers seem too much together. It's nothing you'd need to change to make it sound better or anything, but it's just an observation.
Again, great work with this one.
-blake
p.s. I didn't listen to the long one, but the shorter version sounds good at that length!
Jun-15-2003 21:48
DJ Kibon
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Edmonton, Alberta
All I have to say is WOW.
I have been thinking of putting together another computer mix (lucky number 13), and you just strongly motivated me to do so.
I LOVE this track, it's better than about 70% of the "professional" trance tracks out there. Your main melody is awesome, you don't hear very many trance tracks with really good "strings" type synths. For example, I love "DJ Cor Fjineman - Venus ft. Jan Johnston (Tiesto Remix)" because of the amazing breakdown.
The only thing I would suggest is that it doesn't need quite as long of a "mixing" or "transition" point at the end of the song.
airbase has got tunes that are like 11 mins as well, so don't bother, nobody said anything about those.
if nothing happens in a year im gonna quit and think of doing something else.. 
