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Originally posted by xDaDXeRx I haven't been able to do much this past week on the track due to the fact that I've been working all day and have been busy in the evenings but hopefully I'll have time to get the track in better shape by monday. You all seem to be looking forward to the finished version but I'm not quite sure what you are expecting.I tried adding some elements the other night to the purcussion parts but I didn't have much luck. everything I did either sounded cheesy or clashed with the other elements of the track so I think I need some suggestions.

Umm, well, when I mentioned the percussions I refered to them as they were a bit dead, and kinda "alone" somehow. If you may add some reverb to them, or even replace them with similar ones but kinda harder (without losing the escense), I think that'd improve it.

Personally, i'd try to find better percussion samples, like the kick for instance, it sounds kinda dub and dry, like it needed a little push, same for the snare drum, although this last one would have a better resemblance if the kick changed.

The rest of the song is pretty tigh and armonic, I don't think you'd need to tweak up anything else.

As it is right now the song is great, so far all I can see are those little details i've mentioned, the rest sounds perfect for me. I would even dare to use this on a set, (with your permission of course), but i'd like to wait 'till you're totally satisfied with it.

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a very nice *freestyle* combo of prog & breaks, me likes


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Definatly awesome Better send it to G & D before they release it If they like it who knows, Maybe it will make it on B side

Me wants to slap this on decks. Very nice job!!!

yeah, this is worth a release, just tweak it a bit and send it to G&D!

good stuff. 8.5/10

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Unfortunately the session file for my multitrack recorder won't load this track up so I had to start from an ealier point in this remix and remake it. I remade most of it and fixed it up even better addressing some of the needed elements and now I've run into the same problem again. I must have used to many real time effects then my computer can handle so it crashes the program each time i try to load it. I have a decent system but I'm going to attempt to run it on another computer but still in all this track no longer will be finished soon.

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Originally posted by xDaDXeRx Unfortunately the session file for my multitrack recorder won't load this track up so I had to start from an ealier point in this remix and remake it. I remade most of it and fixed it up even better addressing some of the needed elements and now I've run into the same problem again. I must have used to many real time effects then my computer can handle so it crashes the program each time i try to load it. I have a decent system but I'm going to attempt to run it on another computer but still in all this track no longer will be finished soon.

Is there anything we could do? man, there must be something. What did you use to make the song? maybe someone here knows how to fix it. Could you describe the problem a little more?

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I used cool edit pro 2.0 of all programs , I generally use cubase, this is the only large project that I've used cool pro for, but I sent the file to the developers at syntrillium software who make the program to see if they can solve the situation. thank you for your concern though i appreciate it. The larger session files that include a lot of real time effects, samples and midi stuff seem to have problems running stable in this program.

Great track, the highs just need to be replaced with something that sounds "fatter" and more full sounding IMO, and the sample you used for "embrace me, surround me..." is really weak, but nothing can be done about that really... fix the highs and this is a mint track :-)

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that song is something else, great job, i for the most part am not a big fan of progressive but your breaks where outrageoous keep on spinning.

amazing stuff! really love this

IMO Amazing remix. I would def drop this in a set. Finish it!!