i don't know much about track construction but imo the my religion one does sound pretty ring tonish. The actual main sample thing is very narrow. You need some things sweeping through the background as well. Turn the drums down a bit and I think they're a bit messy and rough too. Like Jace said, you need to get some more things happening in there.

I liked the airwave one more becuase there were a few more things going on in the sample. The less you have to rely on one specific part of the track the better it will be i think. The main sample thing though sounded a bit high and in a way almost too sharp, if that makes any sense.

Mind you I know I couldn't do any better so best of luck with it.

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Meh

Thanx Ghostface, i did notice a slight ring tone thing to it but i had the synth into a guitar so that might have been it...

anyways i took your advice and just changed the 'my religion' and did my best to remove the nokia feel, i gave it a more sweeping effect...but i dunno if that helped it

but thanx still

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