that is ok, that is what we r here for

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You've never told me what you think about that track

I have to admit that this version is a 128bit version...
I do have a CD quality version that sounds more clear and a much better sound but that's for the record companies




Gil Shwarts

sorry cant really tell u what i think, bit busy, 56k connection, and downloading 3 songs from audiogalaxy, surfing, and then downloading a song on gozilla, and then pvd from don valley, so slightley full

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Yeah I can understand that... it's been going like this since I first discovered this web site so what I do is simple, i'm working on some new tunes while my modem is working overtime

Well, I'd like this song much more if there was a memorable central melody to it. The synth breaks that you have aren't that memorable at all, they actually sound a little out of place. Also it can be organized better.

My suggestions, perhaps for a remix of this: Start with a good intro sequence; then, gradually, add the bassline and simple drums; then, add the hats; then, add the scratching and siren; bring this set to a build-up, after which just the synth melody and the vocals appear, on their own. Bring THAT to a build-up as well, when finally everything -- the synths and bassline -- flow like crazy.

Oh, when you bring the vocals ("open your mind") to the build-up, apply the time-stretching effect to this line, when the release is almost ready to happen, so that it will sound like "mi-ii-ii-ind" -- I think that can make it spicier! Well, just my thoughts.

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Originally posted by Eugene Well, I'd like this song much more if there was a memorable central melody to it. The synth breaks that you have aren't that memorable at all, they actually sound a little out of place. Also it can be organized better. My suggestions, perhaps for a remix of this: Start with a good intro sequence; then, gradually, add the bassline and simple drums; then, add the hats; then, add the scratching and siren; bring this set to a build-up, after which just the synth melody and the vocals appear, on their own. Bring THAT to a build-up as well, when finally everything -- the synths and bassline -- flow like crazy. Oh, when you bring the vocals ("open your mind") to the build-up, apply the time-stretching effect to this line, when the release is almost ready to happen, so that it will sound like "mi-ii-ii-ind" -- I think that can make it spicier! Well, just my thoughts.

Well, this is how I designed the track and after alot of testing it proved itself as an awsome floor filler
if i'll change it then it won't be a floor filler anymore and I don't want that.

But thanks for the tips, I'll use 'em next time.


Gil Shwarts

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Originally posted by Gil Shwarts Well, this is how I designed the track and after alot of testing it proved itself as an awsome floor filler if i'll change it then it won't be a floor filler

Well then why the fuck do you come here and ask people to talk about your "masterpiece"

If you know it's a masterpiece then fucking don't boast so much and post it in two different forums and keep bumping the threadz and thinking so highly of yourself, no offense but I don't like your behavior!

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What????????/
Have you completly gone mental? have you lost your fucking mind?
What the hell is your problem?

What did you want me to say?!
"Oh my god!! he replyed my thread, he heared my track and DUDE!!! he has some things to say about it!! I'll leave everything i'm doing now and get right on the track to do it like he said!!!!!!!!!"


No fucking way
If you can't take it, don't submit your thoughts and no one asked you to answer this thread!

And by the way
you only quoted half of my answer, whats the matter with the other half?

the part when I thank you for your tips and took them under consideration and that i've said i'll use them on my next tune?
HUH??? WHAT HAPPEND TO THAT PART???

Stupid!
Jesus man, I thought you are better than that!
and if you don't like my attitude/behavior, you can pick up your freaking legs and get the fuck out of this thread!


Gil Shwarts!

Well, I'm sorry if my post was rude.
It's just that, it seems that to every post you reply, "This track is a floor-filler, it's a masterpiece. Any comments? No, this track is a floorfiller. Any other thoughts on my masterpiece?" Just to show off.

Well, once again if I was rude I take it back, and I'm sorry. Yes,I did read the other half of your post.

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That´s a really hard track. A little bit too hard for hearing in my car, but it´s quite perfect for the clubs...

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Originally posted by Eugene Well, I'm sorry if my post was rude. It's just that, it seems that to every post you reply, "This track is a floor-filler, it's a masterpiece. Any comments? No, this track is a floorfiller. Any other thoughts on my masterpiece?" Just to show off. Well, once again if I was rude I take it back, and I'm sorry. Yes,I did read the other half of your post.

Look man, I always take your posts seriosly and I do use the tips you give me on my tracks but dude, you can't lose your mind just because I don't wanna change that specipic track.

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That´s a really hard track. A little bit too hard for hearing in my car, but it´s quite perfect for the clubs...

Thanks man, couldn't agree with you more

Gil Shwarts...
First off u've been told that u posted it in the wrong forum section.
And don't blame me cuzz moderators try to keep the forums clean and therefore they might just close this thread untill u discuss ur 'floor-filla' in ONCE AGAIN Amateur DJs & Music Producers Promotion and that's the whole purpose of it and no need opening 2nd thread if u already opened it.If u need promotion then that's not where u do it at least in Music Discussion forum ok?

Peace out.