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Listening to Airplane atm,
Very nice track. Not sure about one or two of the sounds in the track but I like the overall feel.
One of the sounds in particular is almost bordering on comedy in my ears. A whistle sound that increases in pitch... I would ditch that if I were you (I know it's a personal taste thing however  ).
Your overall work in this track is superb and a really good clean sound too.
In terms of originality I'm not so sure that I agree with the others, while it's extremely good music it doesn't make me feel "wow, I have never heard anything like this before".
What Clouds are made of is by far the stronger track of the two I heard. The rythm/percussion has a nice tight feel to it. It has a far more progressive feel to it than I would usually go for but this is another very well made track that just has quality written all over it.
I think the lead synth is fine even though it's a commonly used sound, it works well with the overall feel of the track.
Around 2:44 there is a sound that doesn't quite feel right for me. It just seems to feel too metalic for the subject matter if you see what I mean?
I like the drop around 4:15, it works really well with the rebuild that follows.
I know what you mean about the vocalist as it just feels as if one or two segments needed that little something.
Great work overall.
What I must add is that if you wrote these tracks two years ago... Damn, I am looking forward to hear your new stuff.
Cheers
Nem
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Last edited by Nemesis44 on Jan-26-2004 at 12:07
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