the kick is nice n loud yeh but it distorts everything else a bit thats why it is definalty TOO loud

either that or you sampled it craply

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cheers again for the comments

i will try do summat with the lead, dunno quite how tho hehe

cheers paul, glad u enjoyed it

ste the whole thing is too loud + clipping but i couldnt be arsed 2 turn it down will master it properly so its distortion free for your little ears when i'm happy with it

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long time no speak luke! (must remember to pay ntl bills...lol)

kool track.. kick is fine to me.. id just beef up that 3min mark synth! good stuff!

hehe yea mate, pay them funkin bills

looks like i gotta do summat to that synth

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it's very cool bass and perc wise

just needs a little more interesting twists here and there

good stuff though

This is a cool track. The kick is killer, and the simple bass fits, but I think it could be used a bit more effectively.

The percussion is good too, but ya, did you take it from Indicator? Sounds identical.

Nice job overall! Has potential to be a big club stompin' tune.

i like it, the lead sounds wicked. it needs something more though to build around that lead synth, just more agressive sounds, maybe som dark pads. and also sampling is ok if it's not blatantly obvious where you took it from, make your own beat damnit

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Originally posted by -blake- This is a cool track. The kick is killer, and the simple bass fits, but I think it could be used a bit more effectively. The percussion is good too, but ya, did you take it from Indicator? Sounds identical. Nice job overall! Has potential to be a big club stompin' tune.

top marks for reading the rest of the thread

i got a little sub lead goin but it loses the energy of the track, gonna have another bash later

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Hey Luke,

I played this track out both Friday and Yesterday, it worked really well but when I heard it over the speakers it was clear that this had the potential to be a real stopmer if you make the build more aggressive as stated in a previous post.
Even had one of the other DJs ask me what it was.

I strongly urge you to work this a bit more as it's a great track, and I would love to see it become what it has the potential to be.
Don't worry about he beat sample, loads of people do that even pros.

Cheers
Nem

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wow

this is so wicked.

I laaaaaaav it

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omg i love this track, it is so simple, yet get's me bopping of my face, good job !

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