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John
In Praise Of The Sun

Registered: Sep 2001
Location: Delft / Den Haag / Dordrecht,
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| quote: | Originally posted by dj-sean
K, this is a lot better than the first version but still could use a lot of work. For one, the kick has like no low-end and practically gets drowned out after the breakdown. Remember, this is dance music, that kick really needs to thump. That little bass type melody that comes in at 1:16 is out of key and detracts a lot from the track IMO. I'd lower the reverb on the clap and make it sharper. There's also still a lot of muddiness, especially around the 1:40 mark. Sounds like everything has too much reverb on it or something, and you can barely distinguish between the different melodic elements and the bassline.
Things to change:
Kick
Snare
Bassline (Make all of them way more crisp).
Things that are great:
Effects! (these are really good)
Ambience, buildup.
This remix has a lot of potential, and like I said just needs a bunch of cleaning up.
Cheers, keep it up.
Sean |
i completely agree with this (and yes i'm also a bit lazy )
you definately need to change the sound of the bassline. other then that nice remix
john
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Feb-16-2004 17:13
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Design
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Registered: Sep 2003
Location: London, Canada
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Sounds good, I love the intro, fast and exciting.
It sounds well mixed and mastered. The break is good, professional sounding...the synths are coming in great! I would not change the kick, suits the song.
keep up the good work
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Feb-20-2004 04:56
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tranzMental
Supreme tranceaddict

Registered: Mar 2002
Location: Miami, Florida
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| quote: | Originally posted by dj-sean
K, this is a lot better than the first version but still could use a lot of work. For one, the kick has like no low-end and practically gets drowned out after the breakdown. Remember, this is dance music, that kick really needs to thump. That little bass type melody that comes in at 1:16 is out of key and detracts a lot from the track IMO. I'd lower the reverb on the clap and make it sharper. There's also still a lot of muddiness, especially around the 1:40 mark. Sounds like everything has too much reverb on it or something, and you can barely distinguish between the different melodic elements and the bassline.
Things to change:
Kick
Snare
Bassline (Make all of them way more crisp).
Things that are great:
Effects! (these are really good)
Ambience, buildup.
This remix has a lot of potential, and like I said just needs a bunch of cleaning up.
Cheers, keep it up.
Sean |
I agree with Sean. A few elements were good, but I didn't like some of the percusions, or the basslines. Just my opinion. Keep up the good work.
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