ok, i will be as honest as possible.....

There are some very good parts to your tracks... and theres some very very ordinary cheesy parts to your track.


Good:

* pads
* percussion
* bassline
* the key change in the bassline
* SOME sfx ( note not all )


Crap:

* Leadline
* Cheesy sounds / melodies ( not your pads )
* Break is awful ( especially the breakbeat crap )

Sumarry:

I wouldnt buy / play this... having said that you are very talented, especially if this is a first tune... well done on a great effort... Try to make your melodies subtle, spacey and tight... you need to work a bit on your sequencing too...

Keep up the good work : )

thanks guys...

@ onion... im not 100% pleased with the lead and im working on that already...

Absolutely stunning tune. Really enjoyed this one, very proffesional sound. I really can't think of anything to critic...
As to the sounds sounding cheesy as someone said, they are wrong!

soundrush very impressed! This is your very first track or just your first one sharing with us? And secondly, this was created 100% in Reason? Very, very nice work.

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Hi Soudrush,

The production in your tune is really good I think. I believe there are many club labels in Germany, so you should be able to find one! Good luck!!

I also have a request for you. I really like that "splashy" clap sound you use in your track. Would it be possible to upload that sample for me! I would really appreciate it! Thanks!

PS: if you have no upload space, please let me know so I can help you with that!

Last edited by Dance123 on Jul-14-2004 at 04:11

Cool track but work with the LEAD sound more before sending to labels, right now they would say -> NOT BAD AT ALL and thats all BASSLINE and PERCUSSION -> TOP NOTCH!!! Breakbeat is not good, hurts my ear comparing with rest of the song! But defo good one

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Pretty nice track I think. I really like the build up, nice atmosphere. But I'm not a big fan of your lead, it could use some more power. After the break it collapses a bit i think, it should 'banging' a bit more in the climax. But over all it's a really professional track with a nice atmosphere but I think it could use some improvements.

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a sample of the final version has been uploaded. no need for feedback anymore. thanks for the help.


cheers, niklas

Have you allready signed the track or are you still planning?

link isnt working...

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Well I would disagree with Orion and say that I like your breaks. The pads are awesome and the bass is top notch.

Overall: 8/10

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