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Originally posted by Kaveh Thanks dudes Yes, as it looks now it'll be signed/released. I'm gonna remake it and put attention to all the ideas you've given me here ;] much appreciated =) also tell me if there's anything special that annoys you etc (except the obvious things such as the barking ). //Kaveh

congrats on having it signed mate, (Y)
i would take it down if i were you

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Originally posted by John congrats on having it signed mate, (Y)

seconded.

hehe, when are you gonna get back in the studio John?

btw, love the track, if you can improve on it, then all the better to you! let me know what turns out, and i too, am curious about the remix(es).

cheers

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Great track you have here - very pro sounding. Really captured that samba feel with the metallic percussion and whistles. That breakdown is an utter beauty with that piano melody - it gives me such a great feeling. The vocal seems to get in the way at times though, but I guess this is just a minor complaint...

Love it. Top stuff!

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Congrats on getting it released
Deserves it

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YOOOOOO Kaveh.
Nice song, interesting percusion - something different I love piano and synth

My note is 9/10
yeah good productions

Please listen to my music (Sunclyder - Sunclyde)

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very sweet! i love that whistle type noise in the kick! very sweet of a tune!

just wanted to say i still enjoy this as much as when i listened to it the first time.

absolutely gorgeous track..


any news, label/remix(es)?

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Originally texted by Jakhira Out with the dog at the moment. Chicks love him, and I love chicks... The world is in harmony

Great production Little too cheesy but sounds very good ... reminds me SAFRI DUO (no hard feelings) -> anyway its good track , archived!! keep it up

Piano is really great! nice track

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Thank you very much for all the replies guys! Best reward you can get

It'll be released on Inspired Records (in winter prolly).
About the vocals: yes, they're just there temporary. I'll either remove them or get a real girl to do them :E

//Kaveh

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holy shit, this is awesome!!!

piano is out of this world. really really enjoyed this, superbly written adn produced etc. Love the melodies and effects, i cant put a finger on anythign that is wrong with this track tbh.

wish you every success with the release of this!

P.S. i'd prefer it without the vocal, up to you i guess, but the tune carries itself beautifully without imo!

pps have you considered using the piano melody as an intro/outro?!

ppps ok ive found a little critisizm- i think the middle breaks down to much, as in i think the tune is going to end before the tune returns for a second time. i think it should not break down as much and perhaps tease with a little bit of melody... maybe i'm wrong!

Any objections to me burning a CDR of this and playing it out?

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It's really nice mate I would suggest to ditch the piano at 1:47 and use it somewhere else in the song. The percussions are well made The first break is so nice with the piano and the water FX.

The dog sample is so freaking funny . Leave the dog sample in your remake please I really enjoyed the samba style drum work you made.

really really solid track, alot of unique qualities in this production. piano just sounds crystal clear, yes this is somewhat euro style but still blows away the euro cheese that exists today. congrats on the release.

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