Here's a lullaby to close your eyes goodbye
It was alwyas you that I despised
I don't feel enough for you to cry oh well
Here's a lullaby to close your eyes goodbye

my favorite part is when the vocals are almost by themselves, without the kick or anything

sent me shivers, and that only happens when i hear something melodically awesome... good work

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I love that piano...

not sure if this has been address but the kick/bass IS TERRIBLE...

there is NO bass and the kick has too much snap...

the lyrics somewhat come in out of no where.. a breakdown or something might of been a better place to put it in...

too much treble as well (i see that's been meantioned, but I'll meantion it again)

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LMAO

nevermind, I figured it out, Pascal's secret... shhhhhhhh

I adore this tune.

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Thanks for telling me about this Elle, I love it!!!

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omg carl b...this song is fuckin awesome if you excuse the language! i hope you get this signed or somethin...cuz i think i want to buy this and add to my collection!

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Really nice remix mate, your production to my ears sounds perfect

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Does it not have an air of brens reix of evavescence to anybody?

qual track all the same

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Last edited by Andy C on Nov-16-2004 at 12:03

hey carl,
I was at a gig with Matt Hardwick this saturday, and he played this remix went down very well!!!! congrats!

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Amazing tune Carl. Matt Hardwick played it on saturday, sounded amazing mate!

keep it up!

Your bass needs more... bass.

Your FX are very pretty.

I'm not really a big fan of vocals with lyrics, but I must say you handle these pretty well. I still don't like them, but it's better than most vocal tracks.

The breakdowns sound sort of like new age music. It's kinda weird.

Hi Carl,

Right, some feedback that will hopefully help you.

The kick is the first thing i noticed. There is a real lack of solid bass on it and far too much midrange on it, try adding more below 70 Hrz.

The bass is also lacking a bit, but will sound improved once the kick is sorted.

The acid is cool, but would be better with some sharper top end on it.

Vocals need to be louder, and some high mid needs added to bring them to life.

Hope this helps!

George