It does sound very 'GM' not to my taste at all!

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Originally posted by optik this is what religon does to you - beware I actually feel sick.

looooooooooool

that singing at 0:40+ is great... sounds like someone doing karaoke

BTW.. karaoke means "tone deaf" in japanese.... i think it suits this well.. hehehe

the underlying stuff is pretty good.. the kick needs to be a lot fatter but I kind of like the piano and the snare... did you do the bottom part or did you download a premade one?... but i guess if you downloaded it, it wouldn't be such a bad thing.. that's what all the proffesional rappers do anyway

pretty good job writing the lyrics too.. try using some FX.. and taking vocal lessons if you want to pursue this

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