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listening now. lovely start!!! i think my main critisism is that the kick/bass are both way too quiet in the mix and everything else is way too loud, perhaps balance these out a bit. also in the middle section where its all happening there is a bit too much happening for me to take in, some of the synths are a bit to solid and thick for my liking, and without a loud enough bass to compliment them, i get a bit confused. melody is lovely, really good job there, nice percs etc. i would say some more reverb on some of the synths and try to seperate each sound a bit more in the mix by tweaking the eqs on each track. I find that at the moment its all a bit flat and lacks dynamics. Most of these comments are nitpicking tho, its a really really lovely melody, just suggesting things that for me would make it A+ work.

Mike

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thanks everyone....

please keep up the excellant work on criticisms....

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Liking the intro, sounds very different, quite dark. Kick sounds too quiet. Great use of synths and drums alike, well mastered. No real hook but otherwise nice work.

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yeah i agree, its lovely and original, love the way it starts, but the kick is way to low, can barely hear it. you had the same problem with your mix of oceanlab satalite.

i think this type of track should be carried by a good strong kick to really bring out the atmosphere.

also i agree with mike about too much going on about 4-5mins into the track, i'm almost getting dizzy listening there.

production wise its great as always, really refreshing and original.

keep it up guys just needs little more work i think.

i would like to remix this.

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Nice one!

listening to it right now with my headphones on.
i like the melody and like stated earlier very egyptian feel. im liking it a lot and i really dont know what else to add to all the other comments. great work !

sounds great, apart from what everyone else said. the kick is too muffled

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