nice tune, sounds like its a bit too loud in parts and goin fuzzy tho

other than that, n1

Great tune Mart, though i still like Imagine more .

i didn't really notice anything clashing.

Further nice job on mixing and mastering .

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imagine... nothing to live for... we can fly!

hehe, yeah man this kicks ass

thanks for sharing

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How do you manage to get everything so smooth? All the sounds are perfect. Hmm... At 03.34 and 03.54 there's something that doesn't sound good... Offkey. At 04.03 too. At 04.23. too. So it's looping... You have to fix that one.

Not my cup of tea really, but I kinda enjoyed it - despite the terrible offkey that was looping.

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Argggggggggggggghhhhhh, this is starting to do my head in now. Even with your times alexpea I still cannot find this 'terrible' looping offkey thing. And if I can't find it, I can't fix it. I know I've lost my way, but this is a new low.

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Hey Mart,

Nice stuff you got there, try to fix that off-key error and your all set for another masterpiece.

Another nice one man. Great tune for me to listen to when I will go fly later on this week.

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Deep and hypnotic, I couldn't believe the song was eight minutes... I'm lovin it man great work

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Oh, man! That offkey is really annoying me! I listen quite alot to this track atm, but damn that chord should have been fixed. Hmm...

At 03.27 the first chord is played.
The second one comes at 03.30 - 03.31
Third at 03.32 - 03.33
And at 03.34 the offkey-chord comes. Iiiik!!

Let the people help you, and upload the midi for those chords that I've mentioned. Seriously, I bet it would have taken me 2 seconds to fix that one

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Ah-hah, thanks alexpea. I think I've just about found out what the offending chord is. When I next feel up to it I'll take a look and come back with a final mix. Hopefully in that version I'll also be able to address some of your other criticisms. In the meantime, thanks for the feedback and I hope you still enjoyed the track.

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Lovely sounding track, I like that subtle vocal, and all the perc sounds nice, good mixing & mastering I believe. It's quite chilled, and also emotional, good piano line.

I'm not a big fan of the string melody, but that's a personal thing I suppose... I'd probably like it a bit thicker-sounding, more harmonies and lower down notes.

Reminds me a bit of Way Out West at some parts, like when the beats come in after a breakdown. Good breakbeat trance.

I think this is one of the tracks I'll keep on my playlist

Keep up the good work

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very deep stuff as usual.

very beautiful... these vocals remind me a bit of the moby-style... the track has the same kind of atmosphere.
sounds very pro too... except that off-key that is not so shocking

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