Good punch kick. Conga type percussion sounds good. Pads are excellent. Bassline stands out nicely, might be clipping though. Open hat doesn't fit so well with the rest of the percussion.
Pads on the first breakdown are good but would be better imo if they were a little quieter to begin with. There's no melody to engage the listener. The breakdwon had you believing a huge lead was about to burst in but it didn't. There's some great parts to this tracks and elements of the production are a1 but it just never really goes anywhere. Possibly a bit on the loud side as well.

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Hmmm really good piece of sounds, your work on the drums is nice, I love the congas !
Your bassline has a good rythmic but I find the sound a bit strange (I can't explain what I hear )...
Your melody is sweet and catchy, i love it ! The vocal works well (remind me "whiteroom - whiteroom" or some prods from BT), good work on it.
Enrich your sound and you'll be signed !
Thx for sharing D-Miurge

Miruge that is probably the offbeat subbass.

I think it goes somewhere because the part before the break sounds different, than the "climax"

am not sure what could be so bad that it is sounding nice and loud.

Thanks alot for the comments .

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

i like that tribal sound that goes in teh beginning, the beginning percussion sounds a lot like another song i have heard, but i cant remember the name. feel like i am int eh jungle right now or something. haha. bassline is nice. i like your melody and fx, i am not listening in headphones but the songs production quality sounds superb to me. i like the break, and the pads in teh break too, give it a kind of spacey feel. awesome song, if i still spun iw ould probably play it

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Originally posted by Massive84 Miruge that is probably the offbeat subbass. I think it goes somewhere because the part before the break sounds different, than the "climax" am not sure what could be so bad that it is sounding nice and loud. Thanks alot for the comments .

Nothing worng with a loud track just that the levels might be clipping, it distorted a bit too much when I had it cranked right up.

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Originally posted by RaverBabySy Nothing worng with a loud track just that the levels might be clipping, it distorted a bit too much when I had it cranked right up.

oh ic, i could render it again , i really didn't notice the clipping, i played it loud on headphones, il try speakers tomrrow when i can.

thanks hadi

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

really nice sfx, very atmospheric and alive. good use of balance. bass is really smooth. i like the dark and deep mood. the synth melody before the breakdown i don't really like very much...it adds unneccesary sounds to a good foundation. the breakdown itself fits nicely with the rest of the track, sound-wise.

overall, great work on the percs, sfx and bass. very solid track.

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