hey man!
i really think that this is a great track and it does remind me of Robert Nicksons work, i cant wait to here the whole thing and i look forward to listen to ur upcoming prductions. keep up the good work

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Originally posted by BrownTA4Life hey man! i really think that this is a great track and it does remind me of Robert Nicksons work, i cant wait to here the whole thing and i look forward to listen to ur upcoming prductions. keep up the good work

thanks, Minjah!

i'm glad you like it

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Originally posted by Niklas Harding quality melody, some work needs to be done tweaking sound wise.. but im sure it will get there! this sounds really good!

finish it pete, and give a copy to this nut so he can play it in vancouver and i can be like, OMG ITS PETE's TRACK!!! and go crazy with the dancing!

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btw, it does need tweaking. low end imho. tweak that kick/clap too.

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Originally posted by DjCommisad finish it pete, and give a copy to this nut so he can play it in vancouver and i can be like, OMG ITS PETE's TRACK!!! and go crazy with the dancing!

when will Nik plays in Vancouver?

i hope he will play the vocal version of the track there...

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again, a nice production!

very uplifting

niiice break!! but indeed, you could put some more variation in the melody and maybe u can tweak you're bassline so it would pump with the kick

great work!

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Originally posted by teknasia again, a nice production! very uplifting niiice break!! but indeed, you could put some more variation in the melody and maybe u can tweak you're bassline so it would pump with the kick great work!

thanks for your comments, mate

i just reworked the bassline, a bit, and did some tweaking on the whole tune, hopefully it might got better,

and currently working on the vocal mix

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wooooh...i really really liked the melody on this one. could be a really big tune, i didnt like the portamento/glide melody though

dude get this to some labels and they may organise some top remix for it and release it. the melody is good enough to make it out there

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Nice song.. need some work but realy nice melody.. try a female vocal on it.. or.. why not a male.. hehe..

bad things :

-Your kick it not good.. to low.. it need more punch!
-You need to make the song more pushing.. lift it more.. try using more rythm's.. it can have something to do with the mastering..
-As I always say.. make it more original.. make music so people know its you.. make people recognise your song.. a good example is yahel - voyage

Keep it up

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Originally posted by Demilio Nice song.. need some work but realy nice melody.. try a female vocal on it.. or.. why not a male.. hehe.. bad things : -Your kick it not good.. to low.. it need more punch! -You need to make the song more pushing.. lift it more.. try using more rythm's.. it can have something to do with the mastering.. -As I always say.. make it more original.. make music so people know its you.. make people recognise your song.. a good example is yahel - voyage Keep it up

hehe, yeah the lyrics for the vocal version are already finished, just need to re-record again the vocals, to get a bit better quality, and then completed,

btw, thanks for your comments, im going to add some little more changes on the tune to get a bit better,

and also making the follow-up of this track

cheers,
Peter

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hey guys,

i uploaded a sample of the final version of the instrumental mix, it's unmastered, though, but i hope you will like it!

any feedbacks would be much appreciated

thanks for listening to it,

Peter

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things to work on:

right now, the kick is not punchy... it has this trailing bass that makes it lose it's punch...

the bass is muddy to my ears (not the one that comes in at 1:50)

things i enjoyed:

the track is dreamy and atmospheric... the melody is hypnotic and beautiful

the track flows well....

melodic components are complimenting each other well


great track