i dont wanna go so far as to say theres too much piano in the breakdown, but maybe ease up on the delay, as it really jumbles things when you're playing a lot of notes. the piano melody sounds really cool once the beat comes in. the percussion could definitely use a bit of help, but i like the general chunky sound it has. i don't really like the breaks section. i think the kick is far too active for the mood that you set throughout the rest of the tune. ease up on the kick and do some nice choppy snares which arent so drastic.

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