I don't like bassline ,percusion is ok but nothing special,melody is good but you should add some fx to it .Overall nice but a bit cheesy for my taste
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Jan-12-2005 23:24
Icone
In Dreams...
Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Leuven, Belgium
Good one there so far mate, lovely melody as well. Really like those choirs and pads, though as TOR said, could perhaps use a bit more stereo. Bassline and percs do their job very well.
I'll keep an eye out for the full one (hopefully)
Cheers,
Wim
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Originally posted by Bren-F
They are from a rather nifty (and large ) Akai classic choir multisample pack I have
Symphony of voices by any chance?
Jan-13-2005 10:31
EternalMusic
Antonio Gomez
Registered: Jul 2002
Location: Tiberias, Israel
Very sweet track bren! I liked the piano alot.
The bass was abit to simple for my liking (not that its not pumpin or so), but other than that this one was great!
I have to agree with TOR and Wim on the technical issues though.
Keep it up, good to see some new stuff from you .
Antonio.
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Jan-13-2005 11:58
Apyr0us
tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2004
Location:
Hi there!
nice sample you have there!
The percussion and kick/clap etc are very good imo! ( as you mentioned maybe a bit thin still, but i/m sure you'll fix that)
The bassline is a bit standard, but it works well in the song.
I like the choir and string, I feel the choir could use a little longer attack and release ( or reverb). fix these little things ( or not and you have a solid track!
Mark
Jan-13-2005 16:02
Blizzz
tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2003
Location:
Amazing choir... man i wish i had those samples
Jan-13-2005 17:05
thoughtlessjex
Yakkity Yak
Registered: May 2004
Location: Chapel Hill, North Carolina
Try to beef up that acid stab that plays throughout the intro; it's a little thin.
In fact, a lot of your sounds do with some beefing up in general. It's only a wip, though, so you've got plenty of time.
Finish this up.
Jan-14-2005 22:13
trancedfarmer
Anti-Cheese Crusader
Registered: Aug 2002
Location: Seattle, Washington
Downright shitty.
Jan-14-2005 23:31
Bren-F
LostLegend
Registered: Aug 2002
Location: Liverpool
quote:
Originally posted by trancedfarmer
Downright shitty.
Cheers for your honesty....
Wanker
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Jan-15-2005 12:58
Stino
= Vast Vision
Registered: Jul 2004
Location: Bergen op Zoom
i like the percussion but could be a bit thicker sounding, bit rougher and a bit more on the forground. I think that choir is to standard now, needs more stereo enhancemant, sounds to mono (something that happens when you use a sample). Melody cant really move me aswell, it all sounds a bit to empty so far, i would like to haer more stuff going on in those pads and choirs. I hope to hear a final version.
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Jan-15-2005 16:31
The Drow
Super Programmer
Registered: Apr 2004
Location: Israel
Never ever ever put a choir with a pad when the pad is upper on the mix.
It sounds wrong.
Oh you'll get this shit remixed by me...
This is amazing.
I really like the melodies.
Bass should have more layers imo.
Open Air sucks near this thingy.
8/10