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- nice sounds in the intro
- chord progression seems a bit too 'robotic', as if you weren't thinking musically, but just picked the next note in the scale in the piano roll
- there essentially no prominent percussion elements, which makes it seem a bit empty
- like people said, the seems like its building toward something, but needs a lead sound
- strings or pad ofcourse would definatly be nice
- overall, its very repetitive melody and structure wise and there is nothing really interesting going on. you need to star paying attention to detail and work hard on the small things to make an outstanding track
- like people said, this could be a pretty nice start to a song, but it needs more
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