Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Stoney Creek, ontario
track sounds nice and smooth and really well put together, but i gotta agree with one of the comments about the pluck sound not really do'n it for me. don't know why.
very nice! first track ive heard from you.. it sounds a bit fishy on the kick in at around 3:46?.. or maybe its just me.. sounded like a skip or something
keep up the good work.. want to hear more!
Mar-04-2005 10:17
trancintaiwan
golf and trance fanatic
Registered: Aug 2003
Location: from New Jersey, in NEW YORK CITY
hey, i'm loving this...
nice melody and percussion...
got a full version somewhere? i'd like to use it one of my sets...
Mar-04-2005 11:43
Diginerd
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jan 2005
Location: Stamford, CT, USA but from the UK
Very nicely done. I too love the vocal sample. I also love the little drum cutup before the beats come back at 3:45-3:46. keep it to just the one though in the track as it could get annoying quickly if repeated.
For me though the flow of the track needs a little work, and the main riff is just too loud. Are you using a compressor or limiter on the master bus? It sounds like it's ducking the rest of the mix when the main riff is playing in the drop.
Overall the quality is great, but to my ears the mix sounds a little "Safe". There is a fine line beween a bland mix, a great mix and an over the top one. Again to my ears I'd say this is on the great to bland end of that scale. It could be pumped up a litle more without danger of getting over the top.
Great work though.
Rob
Mar-04-2005 16:56
Action Level
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Aug 2004
Location: Russia
Nrg2NfinittrancinchinkDiginerd
Glad to see ur comments here guyes
p.s. trancinchink check out ur pm's
great bass and percs, the buildup is great for this tune. I like the female sounds in the song. Nice main synth - Vanguard? Anyway it sounds cool, especially with that backing type synth - this is atmospheric stuff - but i cant help feeling let down after the fantastic break - maybe stick in another saw.
Anyways brilliant song mate
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Mar-06-2005 01:12
gerrycueto
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Registered: Aug 2004
Location:
nice from the start... I think the kick maybe too low... try rolling it off to 30hz... and include a beefy bassline to fill the lows... the gap between the nearest bassline and the kick is very wide... you should get a solid bassline to fill the gap.
grr, I hate fade-ins and outs to other parts of the track. What exactly are you trying to prove? or hide? that you're not sharing the whole thing to encourage label interest? or is your track that boring that you need to fade out of the part it already's at to a part that's more interesting? Either way, it's pathetic. Let's quit this guys. If you don't wanna share the whole track, just show us a clip that runs straight though without annoying fades. Oh well, I only heard one, so it's not as bad as some of the tracks that get posted here, where every 5 seconds there's a fade to another part.
Although the track is not my style, it's pretty nice. I like the sound of the lead. Keep it up.
