quote:

Originally posted by John hey pete, this sounds wonderful! lovely melodies and really nice sounds you used here. although it has your usual problem with the bass (well all the tracks ive heard from you seem to have the same problem). i can hear it, but it should be a lot more prominent. it lacks power. but besides this its amazing! great job mate, john

thanks John, really much appreciated,

and don't worry i will fix the bassline this time!

___________________
//Aneym.com Staff

quote:

Originally posted by Mycron thanks John, really much appreciated, and don't worry i will fix the bassline this time!

alright, really looking forward to the final result!!
ive got this sample on repeat for a while now and i'm loving it more and more. i reckon this is the best track you've made so far

___________________


ta-forum-members midi site

Hey Peter!
Love this track! really like these 'nickson' pads/choirs. melody is wonderful! im lovin it.. it has some nice fx sounds. only one thing.... fix that bassline!
anyway really like what you h ave done! good job.
can't wait to hear the final version.
keep it up mate!

-Renco

___________________
http://www.djrenco.com/

nice atmosphere.
you got to improve your bassline man. it's not bassy and punchy nuff.
nice break.
cool fx.
the melody is great.
i think you should add more energy to the main part.
I mean when the break ended i was expecting a great bangin lead...

___________________
My tracks:
The Darkone - You Come With Power
The Darkone - Falling Stars Part 1 (Original Mix) *NEW*

Very nice production, your best so far I think! I really like the atmosphere, the melody also sounds amazing! Can't wait to hear the full track!

Pete,

I think this is your finest work yet. I'm really feeling the melody. It has a current sound, while still maintaining a sense of originality. The only improvement I can suggest is further equilization, which I'm sure will come with time. I'll be interested to hear your later revisions. Nice job!

Wow

::Waiting patiently for the final::

man this is the shit that re-ignites my love for trance. very spiral'ish. love it.

___________________
lower the curtain down on memphis
lower the curtain down on me...

Good stuff as usual Peter, although this time I feel the production is a lot more full and solid on the whole!

Maybe you could do with stronger overall percs though - the kick/clap stand out so clearly but the rest of the percs fade into the background. Actually, the open hi hats are fine.

Great sounding tune though, can't wait to hear a finished version.

___________________

"I expect to pass through life but once. If therefore, there be any kindness I can show, or any good thing I can do to any fellow being, let me do it now, and not defer or neglect it, as I shall not pass this way again."

Sweet Melody.

Needs more "oomph" for the bass and/or a sub-bass, and/or possibly a rapid/jumpy synth to go along with the bass, low strings/pads to add emotion, etc (just a suggestion).

I am digging the melody though,

would be nice listening to it while driving during summer with the car's sunroof off (or relaxing while having an ice cold one)

Keep up the good work.

-Kenidel Lopez

I love it pete !
Just work on that sub bass, and strenght the kick up abit.

sweet melody

Antonio

___________________
.: Sit back and relax... Put on your seatbelts and get ready for a new experience, that will take you to the highest level of Sound & Melody :.

gr8 track but i cant get in to it. you somehow need to make it more... emotional. i think its the break... when the beat kicks in there is the same melody as b4. make it a little more banging or a little more trancy with more feeling if you know what i mean. bass sounds fine to me... think how it would sound in a club .