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First of all, I dont know the original, but this one sounds really good, I like the melodies and how the sounds work together.
Just a few things coming to my mind:
Production is mostly fine, but in my opinion, that electric piano (?) could have less low end and sound clearer in a way. I think you should weaken the lower frequencies a bit.
I think the beat could get much more upfront. It is really nice, but it seems to disappear the more elements you introduce. It seems very distant in a way. I also think you could alter it a bit maybe, it's playin the very same loop most of the time, I'd suggest you introduce another rythmic element.
Again, nice strings, nice melody progression, really beautiful. Work on the beat in relation to the overall mix and this track will become even better. Nice one 
Considering this as a webside loop this fits perfectly I think!
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