sounds pretty nice so far man. i'd suggest pitching up that clap a step or so tho, it just sounds too heavy and dry for the rest of the track. very dreamy melody, sounds good. percussion is pretty minimalistic, but it sounds alright.

keep it up.

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The Lead sounds similar to MayFlower's.

Although different kick, some diff pad notes and so forth.

Great job mastering/eqing so far (although the bass needs more lows).

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sounds nice needs more on the low ends Im digging this melody!
catch u on msn.

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hey Pete.. this sounds really good man! love the nickson pads, but please do not use it every time in your tracks that outback sound is very good and you basslines are STILL very weak perc is a little standard i think..anyway like what you have done! can't wait to hear the final version!

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Hello,Peter..Greetz from Lithuania

hats-I think need sliced beat or smthng,or create drum loop,then hats would be nicer,because now hats are pirmitive(Is this word in English? )
The track is really good,harmony,pads,oh yeah,thats is Trance....I really like that.
Very good kick.
Intro is not clear(I think because this is only a sample of the track...)
Bass good be much bassier.
Very good drum rolls(stylish.... )


Keep going Peter,nice work(but can be EXCELENT work)

thank you guys all, for the comments, suggestions, much appreciated!

to be honest, as i said this is really an early work yet looking the whole production, i mean especially the bassline, i just messed around with it, i hope i will get the time finishing this track seriously, sometime soon,

i will keep you all updated, later

cheers,

Peter

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hey pete!
lovely melodies you've got here! (as usual)
i love your style, although i seem to reckognize some of the sounds from earlier tunes and the bassline is still very weak. (as usual too, we want more low!!)
also i'd prefer less minimal percussion. but it works like this.
the pads and plucks are awesome and besides the low end its mastered well. great track!

john

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Hey man

I do quite like the melody, even though it is a tad generic for my tastes.
Agree about the low ends though, need to up that bass! Nicely produced, but needs something more to make it really work, maybe you are working on that...but that's what I feel it needs.
And as for the name of the song, well I have to say that that is one of the worst names I have ever seen for a song . Cinnammon is a baking ingredient, not the name for a trance song!
But what ever floats your boat nigga

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man you have greath stuff,i dont have any complaint,every track is full of melody and lot of feeling,was a total delight to my ears,keep the good stuff mate

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really like this .... wondering what u used for melody as its a very pure sound i like it. its better to work on general feeling of track first then worry about eq and tweaking at end cau sometimes its easy to get caught up it it all and the feelinf goes


good luck

isrefel

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Originally posted by isrefel really like this .... wondering what u used for melody as its a very pure sound i like it. its better to work on general feeling of track first then worry about eq and tweaking at end cau sometimes its easy to get caught up it it all and the feelinf goes good luck isrefel

hey man good to see more Northern Irelanders here

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Nice, chilled out track. Melodies and padwork are good, but I think you should work more on the hats. They sound a tad simple.