hum when I load the patch the oscillator 2 transposition isn't working..
set it to 0 then reset it to -1
you can try to play with the filter attack, nice alternatives sounds if you tweak it.
I gave you the patch without any effects, you can try to add a little chorus or stereo separation to make the sound surround like MS one.
You can also add a high pass filter at 40HZ and maybe reduce the 3KHz a little.

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