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As a listener when listening through a collection of music you expect a song to be good, otherwise you'll skip it and move on to the next song. Upon hearing your song I immediately felt an amateur vibe coming out of your track. The drums, the melody, and the overall song felt weak. Let's begin with the drums. I lack the proper terminology so bear with me. Instead of the drums you used try either of these 3 approaches:
drum
drum2
drum3
Notice how the drums inject life to the song already. Moving on we focus on the melody that starts at 18 secs. This sounds like it was made on a casio keyboard. Try reworking the melody altogether so it sounds more professional. Finally we look at the breakdown starting at 2:15. Instead of that setup go for a more stronger approach like this:
breakdown
I realize this isn't the beset example, but my point is that this breakdown demands my attention. It's so good you can't run away from it. Overall you had a problem with making the track stand out. Make the track using stronger elements and take more risks with variety because you don't want your song to sound like one big loop. For instance, "Call On Me" by Eric Prydz is a good example of what you do not want to sound like.
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the mashup is with a Famous Love Remix track.
