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Amazing how much attention it gets when the word "girl" is in it 
Rightly deserved though, there are way too few female producers.
I don't think I want to add much to small details here and there because I think it has been covered already.
I think this would feel good with more layers. That would deffo get it very uplifting. In the beginning with the arpeg, have two arpegs go together, the first one as you have now, the second one play in synch to the first one but in a twin melody that shifts more and builds that "uplifting" feel.
In the break, try having a solo piano or some synth sound build a melodic line to go with your other synths. Have a different more bassy string line fade in and build more atmosphere.
Just some ideas. Good luck with your music
/Fred
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. maybe a longnote bass would work better and add to the 'robert miles' sound you have while remaining sophisticated? 
