Registered: May 2004
Location: Chapel Hill, North Carolina
Nice big kick.
This track gets right to the point pretty quickly, I'd say.
I think the breakbeat at around 2:00 could use more hits on the kick between some of the snares. The track seems to hold out too long, and the energy is affected.
For a first track, this is quite incredible. I think you need to be left afraid of panning. There's some panning in this track, but it seems to prefer sticking to the center, but most amateurs have that problem. Mixing is pretty good, mastering is alright. It's a pretty damn good track, I'd say.
Originally posted by thoughtlessjex
Nice big kick.
This track gets right to the point pretty quickly, I'd say.
I think the breakbeat at around 2:00 could use more hits on the kick between some of the snares. The track seems to hold out too long, and the energy is affected.
For a first track, this is quite incredible. I think you need to be left afraid of panning. There's some panning in this track, but it seems to prefer sticking to the center, but most amateurs have that problem. Mixing is pretty good, mastering is alright. It's a pretty damn good track, I'd say.
Registered: Nov 2003
Location: Ninjas never tell....
Wow nice track you got here sir! And for your first it's quite impressive!
It's a little repetitive, and that little breakbeat bit could've used a snare pattern to spice it up. But other wise I can't find anything I don't like in this track
I agree with everyone that says you'll release something someday.
Good job!
Cool Track dude...Greetings form Romanian tranceaddiced guys.
Feb-04-2006 20:37
djsphere
producer in training
Registered: Apr 2003
Location: bucharest
thanks guys! i'm glad some of you think i could release some stuff in the future. that would be a dream came true. but that involves lots of practicing, talent and love for music.
This sounds very good, as you say it is a little repetitive but i dont mind that at all. Its definately a good start.
The bassline fits well with the kick you have used... its sounds quite phat aswell.
I couldnt make out too many percs, you might want to look at adding some mid range percs/loops in to fill it out a little.
the levels and general mastering all sound good, there doesnt seem to be any muddiness.
This rhythm sounds really well, I like how two different hi-hats are mixed here. The bassline though, is really thin if you put it next to that deep kick. The synths are pretty nice, I like the sweepy ones a lot. However, I don't like the part after 4:45. It's too drowsy, and too empty. Some agressive synths would do fine, there.
If this is your first production, I'd say it's very well done. Just try to impove your work by making it a bit more interesting.
Mar-18-2006 14:36
djsphere
producer in training
Registered: Apr 2003
Location: bucharest
hey! and thanks for the comments. nice to see this 2 months old thread bumped again.
psylo: i use reason 3.0
i know this kinda empty and there's nothing to brag about it.
for those of you who are interested you can check my 2nd track (in progress at the moment) in my sig: color cube.
good effeort
