That looks kinda B, to be honest.

Anyway, I love the intro of this track! Keep it up!

I really like this track. Very techy, but still uplifting. I think your bass could stand some more presence, though. The lead that plays every four measures is really loud, though, and I would suggest toning it down a little bit.

___________________

www.jexmusic.com - My website

A lush intro ambience is quite welcoming to the genre, as always.

I'm very excited about the drum and bass you've created for this track. It's indeed techy and I like the subtleness of the buildup. The resonance bass is so darn fitting.... I could groove to this segment alone for a long time.

Acid! Yay for acid... This is turning out to be quite a monster of a trancer. The transition from techy to emotional was seemless.

I read somewhere about a comment about a vocal. It could work, but as long as the vocal is an effect -- nothing close to lyrical... and used during the breakdown.

The saw sounded good to me. One thing I like about this place is the standards that are displayed here. I like the saw, but everyone else seems to hate it. I've got soooo much to learn. I will admit, however, that the saw is nothing spectacular -- just worked.

Thank you for sharing this work. Peace!

___________________
Audio-s

45.. very thick, I like, though maybe a tiny tiny bit more EQ might tighten it.

Nice bassline ^_^

A lot of FX, which is cool, they give it a spacey futuristic vibe; it might be overkill by the time the 2 minute mark hits, since the listener's already hooked, but it works.

2:26, cute stabs; try dropping that background effect completely at this point, I anticipate that it will make a huge positive difference (not to say that it's not already good, the elements are all working, but that background FX just seems to mesh against the vibe of the perc and bassline energy).

4:00 nice journey you've got unfolding here.

4:22 good transition, nice and relaxing bridge, love it. FX not really sitting well with me at 4:43 (the "downlifter").

Transition at 4:55 is perhaps holding back the potential of the piece afterwards; fix the transition and make it GREAT, and the rest will all fall together.

PS: liking this part, might want to fade the sub melody stabs in the background out around 5:50 and see how it works with that little extra clarity (the "wahwahwah" in the background)


7:00 good transition, loving the way it embodies the title of the track and captures that frosty type of atmosphere; I bet this would also sound sick in the beginning, perhaps somewhere in the first 2 minutes.

8:30; okay, that background effect you have going... try lightening up on it or dropping it entirely from the melody portions, and perhaps replace it with some more percs. Will make the track that much sicker overall by introducing some clarity in certain bits that should be emphasizing elements other than the FX.

Cheers, thanks for sharing; enjoyed this track.

quote:

Originally posted by DJ Shibby fix the transition and make it GREAT

Sounds so easy, doesn't it...

___________________
Latest releases:
Endless Cycles [Capital Heaven]
The Charlatan [Morphosis]

I've made a slight change of mind. My quote: "I will admit, however, that the saw is nothing spectacular -- just worked", was nothing but the power of group persuasion. I really like that saw because it didn't overclutter the track. The true meaning behind the lead seems to be in it's simplicity and it's glitter over the rest of the trance. This dawned upon me after a second listen.

___________________
Audio-s

quote:

Originally posted by Four_On_Four-er I've made a slight change of mind. My quote: "I will admit, however, that the saw is nothing spectacular -- just worked", was nothing but the power of group persuasion. I really like that saw because it didn't overclutter the track. The true meaning behind the lead seems to be in it's simplicity and it's glitter over the rest of the trance. This dawned upon me after a second listen.

This is exactly what this tune is supposed to be about.

___________________
Latest releases:
Endless Cycles [Capital Heaven]
The Charlatan [Morphosis]

Oh, and I just have to put this in:

___________________
Latest releases:
Endless Cycles [Capital Heaven]
The Charlatan [Morphosis]

quality track guys again,

really like it!

keep them coming!

cheers,

Peter

___________________
//Aneym.com Staff

This track is great. Linked together really well. Intro is supurb. Climax is real nice too. some great breakdowns and build ups. Keep it up. hope to see more from you 2 soon

___________________
do as you feel and feel as you do

Thnx for the share Will check it out Have a great weekend

___________________
Trance Lover