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Kris Xperiment
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Registered: Jun 2005
Location: Charlotte
Arrow Nice bassline

Nice and punchy kick give it that nice flow, now just separate them
I think the track could use a little more progression, in example starting with the kick, then add something to introduce just the bass
and percs and all that. I love your piano but Im not digging the distortion. It would make a beautiful melody without distortion lol.
I think next you should have a build up at 1:42, kill the kick and the clap and highats, to introduce some strings, and from there just make a massive drumroll and you bring everything back in. It's a really nice driving track. One more suggestion. I tend to not use the same pattern more than once when it comes to a crash cymbal or hit, try to variate it gives your track a suspenseful quality


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Lakeus
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Hey.... the sound which you use in the beginning is really beautiful! OMG the bassline is rocking my appartement!!! Original style, the piano is really nice but with the bassline´s distortion there´s too much distortion imo so you could try either the bass or the piano without any distortion. All of the drum breaks are really cool...

I think that the track is mastered way too loud, it´s just distorting over the edge all the time..The rolling hihat could also be little bit quieter. Also mix-wise try to really carve a place at the sound spectrum for each instrument, then it will also sound clearer. The melodies are cool and it´s original, I´m liking it!

Cheers, Lakeus

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kopi_luwak
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Nice Bass, the distortion in the piano is just nasty, try using a filter instead the distortion, distortion and piano dont get along,the hats have a bit of ear piercing highs, the structure is going better than ur last tunes god, that piano, sorry mate I will not finish to listen to it, the piano is gross lol, but in overall u are improving urself .
Kopi =o.


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Takkra
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heya kris :0 ive sperated the bass/kick now on my pc here.. just need to reassamble and rebuild the track a bit.. ive also put down the distorion and used a filter instead.. sounds lot "sweeter" but clean.. I liked it better dark anyway ..
Lakeus glad you like the sounds man!! the piano is now without distortion. hehe too bad kopi you didnt want to listen to this.. I know its not your style at all.. but the distortion is gone now.. and the track is a bit more arranged.. ill post that update soon gonna be a remix of my own here soon hehe already have to other remixes coming hehe sweet


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Looking forward for the updated version :
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