Percussions are good and sounds well done.
Bassline gets a bit muddy with the kick, and as pdm said, it is too wide, make it more centered...

Lead is really good, and it doesnt get to repetetive as some said, it works fine and sounds good.

Overall you could make it sound more clean, it all get so muddy when everything plays at the same time, i e the main section. I thinks it's alot depending on the kick/bassline...

//Alexander

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superb track and I LOVED the breakbeat section... worked into the track really well.

keep up the great work.

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commenting on headphones.
Nice bassline but it is too wide.
1:26 The arp is fine, a bit boring & dry. You should have made it softer and with much more delay.
2:30 I was expecting some kind of fx here, maybe 303s.
~2:40 The break comes... Cool pad.
Nice breaks. Maybe add some sutters or more variations.
The break is reallllly long.

Cool fx after the mini break.
Ok I'm bored now... Wait the fx is a vanguard preset right?
Nice arp after the second break.
But you should have tried to make the track more interesting.

4/10
Omer.

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Originally posted by m2j superb track and I LOVED the breakbeat section... worked into the track really well. keep up the great work

thanks u man, glad u liked it

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thanks, yeah i think its some Vanguard in there yeah.

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youve got great rythms in here ! nice job on the percussion..

imo I dont like the "talking" pad that begins from the start..

the bass sounds really clean, and it doesnt interfere at all with the kick which I find difficult to do..

around 1:33 where the arp comes in.. well I kind of breaks down the nice flow for me, and it works annoying instead of hypnotizing..

the "talking pad" has blend in very nicely now ...

hm..

pads in the break are nice, nice programming.. hehe like the breakbeat ..

wouldve expected a nice melody with the arp, but I guess your going for the more progressive thing..

well it works anyway

5:34 now, im starting to find the track a bit repetitive, a bit too much..

ah I liked that crash !!

ok, second breakdown..
still very much the same in here, keeping the same atmosphere, everything jumps back in again.. personally.. I don't find the 2nd climax necessary..

outro is well build-down, my guess is that it would be very mixable.

production wise awesome, very clean.. but like kopi said a little more focus on melody

please dont think those 9 minutes of my time are wasted

I liked to listen to your track, maybe not too often

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Nice percussions like allways, sounds pretty good.

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hey mate, im loving this, pretty much how i like things, this could fit really nice in some of my sets,

cant wait to mix it in

Hey,

Beautiful track! I didn't mind the talking pads at the beginning! I suppose its a subjective thing. I didn't notice the bass being that muddy, but you could try eq'ing near 100 hz. the pads are nice and the breaks are right on the money! good stuff! I agree that the track got a bit boring BUT I think thats more the progressive sort of characteristic. OVerall, this is very good work!

hey, thanks for bringing my track back to life.

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