Hey Andy!

Listened to your remix. It is a fun way of combining rap to dance. I would just suggest you use better samples. You could use a more banging kick drum for starters and get more of a bass going underneath the track.

During the break at 4.30 you should also get more melodic momentum going. There a big epic trance break would be nice. You use the Intergalactic vocals instead accompanied with a little pad (very nice melody by the way, it totally fits the track) I would get some big pads going there and then fade out the intergalactic vocal and then get the beat going with a big theme and not let the rap come back after that anymore besides the intergalactic vocal. If you know what I mean.

Overall you got some nice ideas. The vocals fit nicely to the beat. Just get some more professional sounds in mate so it won't sound as thin as it does now.

Cheers!

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