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Originally posted by Akia Hey! We need help with this! It is PhilB`s first vocal song so any suggestion on how to make it sounds better would appreciates very mutch! PhilB has produced everything and I have written the lyrics and singing it. http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.p...47809F96E008D4A Thanks! Akia

Nice! what could i say it seems that you becomes more far than i ll do. Mayby you might have contract before i have. Like the vocals. But i would like to do my own version on the track. But i might guess the vocals is not for share. This is a sound for its own. I rather mayby leave the track as it is. It seems that you have thinkin when you wrote this text, it have its purpose.



Snowave

BOOsTER: Thanks a lot!

Rich: Your review really help us, thank you!

Snowave: I´m glad you like it! It´s up to PhilB to decide about the vocal, he will send you a PM. But I can always write you another lyric.

Snowave: I´m glad you like it! It´s up to PhilB to decide about the vocal, he will send you a PM. But I can always write you another lyric. [/QUOTE]



Ok nice =) thanx . I will make plan for forth comings =) cheers

mmmm seems like the link is not working?
i've clicked download, waited for a few minutes and nothing happend..

Sorry! I have updated it now.


****Final version****

http://philb.jamura-music.com/audio/Knight_of_Dark.mp3

Last edited by Akia on Oct-07-2006 at 16:18

track production is very good

lyrics are vry good

inmplementation of vocals in to the track is bad, what ahppened!?

first of all the sync is so off, someone probably allready noticed.
and second is what happaned to the high band of the freq of the vocals? they differ very much from the track.

some obvious issues here, come one solve them and make this track as great as it should be!

Hello

vocals is a weeeeeeeee bit high, but maybe its just me. other then that I dont have anything to "complain" about, anyway what right would I have to do that anyway, its not my track

keep up the good work!

Thank you MeLtrA! We are beginners with vocals, working on it.


LOL! You right >>FK, the vocals are absolutely to high! And actually we WANT complains, thats the reason why we put it in here. We learning from that. So thank you very mutch for your complain !

Last edited by Akia on Sep-14-2006 at 09:42

Bad you erased it , maybe you wrote something good to know!

Cool! I will check it out, it´s a nice track!

Hi!
Need to review something to you. you have been reviewed all of my tunes lately.
Is it you who have produced, or you who just sing?

Very nice production like the soundpicture alot. but, I`m just honest, and have to say the singing seems a bit weak!! What have you used when you recorded it? the voice are very nice very trancelike.
I would love to hear a version with better "recording". then it will be IMO "Indie-trance" (genere), who is very cool!

but. very good!

Hi Rayan! No, I have not done anything with the production, I have just write the lyrics and sing it. I record in Blaze Audio/VoiceSFX, with a Sennhieser 815S microphone. Not the most exclusive things maybe but I had no thoughts to sing in the real produktion, my voice is not that good. But Phil wanted to keep it anyway. And actually, it sounds better than I thought ! What do you think? What can I do to make the vocals sounds better? I am not a singer so any advice appreciates!

Nice vocals, I really like it. I think the vocals need to be tweaked more to fit better in the track. But overall it's very nice. Hope to hear a final version soon.

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