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Originally posted by Eldritch I like this, sounds kind of techy rather than housy. I like the synth line and its melody. The acid synth is cool. The kick needs a bit more mid range punch. The percussion coould be improved, maybe with a more hihat layers. Some techy percussion would be really cool also. I kinda want to hear an off beat hihat as well. Not one of those typical 909 hats mind you, but a discreet and less agressive hihat. The high pitched beep is definately too loud. Lower it to a third of its current level and consider dropping it altogether in a few places. It's a good start.

thanks for the review mate, i think thats the original version youve listened to.. the updated version is fixed and got rid of that "Beep" glad you liked the tune man

Bidor.

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I think that the track needs more pulse in it... and a more dominating synth maybe... a couple of two more melodies would also make more interresting! and all that if your aim is to make people wanna dance to it

Hi bidor! This track is one of its kind! I findin the Blip fx and dance/techno kind of in the bassline i could use example that was used in early nineties. But i like it, but do imo think the key is kinda of dry but mayby you wanted it that way. Sometimes i think i have hard to judge because io dont know what the producer wants out his production. But I will comment akia have 92 replies on her carl phil b prod. And she is not the producer but still listening a lot i might guess. I will never have that many replies even when i was producing since early nineties. And it 's true. was starting fastracker 2 and súpernes and playstation 1 with music and music 2000,rebirth and cakewalk,fruitlyloops and was dj:eing at the age of 13. Putted all it behind for almost 2yers because some reasons and decided to start again later. Like example this is not a track that pvd or tiesto would play today live in front of 40000 people. But i might guess it would be popular on Japanese club. Their target is music mayby related sound like games retro tech/dance even synth kinda pop or something like that. My advice is to let you think on your sound and tell us with next fortcoming production. I will expecting a lot. Like That you use cut filter hi and low and putt mayby dould. add a synth pad or string to the production. if you want to keep more filled. also mayby double pads because to put one lower and one higher mayby even to different pads. but try to sync the etc. use alot eq. mayby to but higher velocity on kig with low freq and lighter on hihats and pads key more lik inte middle and use in field of between for making a better layout on the sound. eq is everything when it comes to mastering a track. I hope you will understand what i mean. And dayly artist are even putt even low freq with light eq to making it sound professional. Like bass kick could have little kick besides with a tune upp and twiste like klick sound to make it sounding sharp. And the technique is all the time expanding. like more effects more ideas and new kicks that are mad by pogrammers etc. I even sample things from outdoor like a bird song and cut a part of it and use in combo with fx and remake to a lighter kick or percusion etc. Or finding samples on the web. If its bad quality so use eq after you might combo it with fx etc. Producing is like a neverending story. I might guess you already have stopped to read. its like a upsays.I will stop from now.

Questions i have?

How many channels o use during your production?

I hear a bassline . a kick . synth as main lead, hihat, lower in the back arp key very tight one. 303 dist key and fx , crash rev crash perc. claps. etc. pan effect on the 303 dist key.

What kind of computer are you using? And witch pogram?

Cheers

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Originally posted by Snowave Questions i have? How many channels o use during your production? I hear a bassline . a kick . synth as main lead, hihat, lower in the back arp key very tight one. 303 dist key and fx , crash rev crash perc. claps. etc. pan effect on the 303 dist key. What kind of computer are you using? And witch pogram? Cheers

thanks File_Corrupted! i will return feedback tomorrow. if got to work in the morning so im gonna go to bed soon.

And Snowave, WOW! for your detailed feedback. really appreciate it, i will return feedback for "underwater shores" tomorrow aswell. im to tired now.. i use 20 channels for my songs. i using Magix Music Studio & Wavelab, my pc is a 1.8Ghz with 512mb ram and 20Gb + 250Gb hard drive.

thanks again guys.

Bidor

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this is a very very diferent song,, I listened to the original version,, I guess you used Vanguard perfectly, I like it

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