Nice kick, cool percs.
The vocals are cool, I like the processing on them. Some issues with pronunciation, but it doesn't really bother me.
I think the chord progression could be better. The vocals sound a bit off at places partly because of that.
The bassline sounds off key when it comes in. I expect it to be D instead of A due to the synths in the intro.
Overall I like this track.

I quite like this. It has good vocals and melodies.
I like the pattern at 4:20. Keep em coming.

Not Bad

Nice vocal nice instruments in this tune but i don't like bassline

Overall is very good

Greetings
Karol

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I´m not a professional singer and I have just recorded for 3-4 tracks, so your words means a lot. Thanks !

Thanks for your comments guys! Really appreciated

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Originally posted by Eldritch The bassline sounds off key when it comes in. I expect it to be D instead of A due to the synths in the intro.

That would actually fit! I dont think I will change it though, would sound weird because of that everything else is based on that A, inclusive Akias song. Thanks for hearing that though, really sharp.

And zoric, it was quite alike that track, but not the so alike the melody. Just the way it's used.. Pretty simple way too use a lead

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Thanks mate Don't know about the bassline though, dont think I've heard it before..

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Maybe Haven't changed the bassline since that clip so thats possible

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Last edited by Speactra on Jan-08-2007 at 23:04

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Originally posted by Akia Sorry to hear that.

It doesn't sound terrible, it sounds more like you get some good expectations about it and then get a bit dissapointed because the potential it had.

Though, I believe this is very good because you've only recorded 3-4 tracks, so props for that

..and don't give up!

wow wow wow!

Loved the haunting nature of the vocals, reminds me of Miriam Stockley if you are familiar with her (she was the vocalist behind the "Praise" song "Only You", remixed by Atlantis, "Fiji" I think it is called.

The production and general track was nice, but certain elements did stick out for me, mainly the bass line. Saying that though, it flowed well and kept my intrest from start to end.

Nice work!

Andrew

Gonna check this one out m8, really like Akia's voice

Im a sucker for this kind of angelic female vocals in trance.