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Step 1: Cut gigantic rail
Step 2: Gun it
Step 3: Speed-dial #3 for poison control/ambulance.
Hypothetically....I agree they are way, WAY too big, not chopped cleanly, would stick to your fingers and the back of the mirror (thus the reason people use the front, glass is smooth)and the general mechanics of it seem forced. What did you use to subsitute for the qualu? My advice is to get some technical advice from a sketchbag (but where oh where to find one?!?)...
Also, the reaction (ie: drawing on himself, submersion) is completely out of touch...while I (hypothetically) found myself in the position of wanting a shower and/or to dunk my head in the fish tank from time to time, I think it was more to get clean/revel in the comedic reactions of my fishies than anything else. Perhaps add a scene where he goes to play frisbee or hits up the PS2 into the wee hours of a worknight and then falls asleep at work...ahem...? Fiddling with stuff would do well, too.
The angles and shots are well enough laid out, but you will need to invest not only in a good DV camera (Canons are nice, Sony PD-170 is a good choice as well) but some basic lighting and a meter. Set up your camera, dial in the lighting and gel as required to create the desired effect and then play with the white balance/temperature/focal length/etc...you'll know when it's right.
At the end of the day, I was entertained for a few minutes, thanks!
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