The track is lovely indeed, I don't if it is me, but the track sounds a little bit muddy yet, not crispy enough, but other than that, it is a nice track. Good Luck.
Registered: Oct 2005
Location: Sacramento, California
IM HEARING THIS RIGHT NOW ON DI.FM RADIO!!!
on the Will Holland Presents - The Enhanced Recordings Show (January 2008)!!
Congrats man!
Jan-07-2008 19:28
mim.cc
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Jan 2008
Location: Sundern, Germany
Absolutely stunning
Absolutely stunning track, the hook melody (with the chords) creates an absolutely incredible mood. Well done! And thanks for providing the MP3.
(Edit: If you still plan on editing it: My personal feel is that you should emphasize the individual ideas (which are all nice) a bit more. Currently, it all blends more or less together. There's one moogish filtered sawsynth with modulation and portamento - which plays a nice melody - that could stick out a bit more at times... but well, it's all a matter of taste anyway I also think that the main hook (the chords) is so nice that *I* would include parts in the track where it's not heard at all - and then suddenly brought back. You don't get used to it so fast then
Well. Anyway. Maybe I should just shut up
Last edited by mim.cc on Jan-07-2008 at 20:28
Jan-07-2008 20:09
theholyalex
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2004
Location: Berkshire
quote:
Originally posted by Nightshift
IM HEARING THIS RIGHT NOW ON DI.FM RADIO!!!
on the Will Holland Presents - The Enhanced Recordings Show (January 2008)!!
Congrats man!
Lol, I wasn't expecting that! Well, you heard it here first :P Annoyed i missed it though will have to catch one of the replays! Thanks for the heads up!
This seems like a reasonable time to update the sample with one of the version played on the show. Improved bassline and slightly tweaked melody. I'm not even going to pretend that this is my last edit of the track any more :P
Cheers again for all the comments guys and i'm glad you like it!
Alex
Thanks for considering If anything, I'd be happy to hear what you think about my stuff anyway.
Jan-08-2008 09:52
hardbeats100
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2005
Location: UK
everone seems to have said everything i could possabley say about this one. gooooooooood joooooooooob maaaaaaaaaaaan
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Jan-08-2008 12:42
sm44
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Wollongong, Australia
hey dude
nice track
but there is something about the bassline i dont like
its just to jumpy
it sounds like you have boosted the eq a little low on it really bringing out one of the lower notes
although i have pretty shit speakers
other than that really nice melodies and synths
with that lead sound it just sounds a little too unclear
it sounds like there is some white noise or something in it, maybe turn that down a fraction, it just detracts a bit from the beautiful melodies you have got going
top work and congrats on getting it playlisted on DI.FM
, you could download 192 kbps versions here:
