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denys envy
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Registered: Mar 2004
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quote:
Originally posted by nchs09
ya the problem is htat that - is not APA format :/


APA is just a reference/documentation format... doesn't matter how the sentence is structured, you can place the reference at the end of the sentence.

if you were using direct reference - ex.

Let's say some author, in 2004, writes "Ania_xox could possibly have the world's smoothest vagina."

then you could either say.

Some Author (2004) says that Ania_xox could possibly have the world's smoothest vagina.

or

It is possible that Ania_xox might have the smoothest vagina in the world. (Some Author 2004)

... or maybe i don't get what you want.

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nchs09
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ya i think it would be incorrect....

its not just for references... i have a book infront of me 500 pages long on how to write.


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Ted Promo
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Registered: Jun 2005
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quote:
Originally posted by denys envy
APA is just a reference/documentation format... doesn't matter how the sentence is structured, you can place the reference at the end of the sentence.

if you were using direct reference - ex.

Let's say some author, in 2004, writes "Ania_xox could possibly have the world's smoothest vagina."

then you could either say.

Some Author (2004) says that Ania_xox could possibly have the world's smoothest vagina.

or

It is possible that Ania_xox might have the smoothest vagina in the world. (Some Author 2004)

... or maybe i don't get what you want.


But those would all be factually incorrect in that there's stalactites and an enigmatic corn maze in there.

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denys envy
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Registered: Mar 2004
Location: falLAcy, CA

quote:
Originally posted by nchs09
ya i think it would be incorrect....

its not just for references... i have a book infront of me 500 pages long on how to write.


:/


ohh well fuck that then, you're on your own. hope you work it out

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quote:
Originally posted by UWM
Participants scored especially high - 100% - on the plagiarism and informed consent items. These results are particularly important for understanding the implications of stealing others' work for their own research and for protecting future participants.


This one is the closest but I don't agree with the usage of hyphens over commas. Since there is no definitive collection of hyphen usage, I feel using commas is the safest approach when writing graded papers.

Participants scored especially high, 100%, on the plagiarism and informed consent items. These results are particularly important for understanding the implications of stealing others' work for their own research and for protecting future participants.

(I added commas and dropped "the" in front of plagiarism.)

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Ania_xox
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Registered: Apr 2007
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quote:
Originally posted by Ted Promo
oh that poor Latino boy.


not as poor as the bovine that is puking AIDS in your sig
lol ya, I can't get over it... I know this is like the 3rd time I've commented
that thing gives me nightmares

PS.
you guys are both sick pervs lol


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Ania_xox
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Registered: Apr 2007
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quote:
Originally posted by nchs09
big cocks.

i think ill go with a combo of answers given here.. you guys rox0r mah b0x0rs!


Ok based on the other posts I think I've figured out the general sense here
I hope my suggestion is useful
(unless you finished this like 3 hours ago. lol then just disregard)

"Participants scored with a particularly high accuracy of 100% in the items dealing with plagiarism and informed consent. Such results are important to the understanding of the implications of stealing others' work - to protect future participants, as well as in the conducting of their own future research."

Get rid of any hyphens or commas around the "100%" - that just made the whole first sentence awkward. The clauses of the second sentence can be very nicely connected with a hyphen A semicolon would also work, but then the second clause would have to include a complete subject-predicate syntactical structure - which might lead to excess wordiness... much like this post LOL BYE


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Re: does this sentence sound gramaticall correct?

quote:
Originally posted by nchs09


you still suck at english

si?


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nchs09
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ya i left for school after my last post... so i didnt see any of the posts till now


thanks for the help though everybody


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None of you saw the obvious lack of an apostrophe on "peoples".


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Ania_xox
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Registered: Apr 2007
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quote:
Originally posted by Abercrombie
None of you saw the obvious lack of an apostrophe on "peoples".


oh ya??
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.... well you have big red ears and no eyes! HAH

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Originally posted by Slylee
oh well, different strokes different vaginas

Some dance to remember ~ Some dance to forget

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